All Comments on '10 Pound Bag Ch. 0.5'

It made me chuckle... outed by an abortion notice in open mail. that method I've never read in a story before.

I saw your latest and decided to read the series - starting here - it well done - I am hooked - and expect all 5’s

But for the record - bourbon is a kind of whiskey and sour mash is a way to make whiskey including virtually all bourbons. The only distillers who rage about sour mash in their marketing tend to be from Tennessee where they have been falsely claiming the Tennessee whiskey is different from Kentucky whiskey for two hundred years,

Raises glass to the gentleman from California.

Bourbon has to be made in Kentucky. That’s probably why Tennessee distillers make a big deal about sour mash.

2 stars - why would the woman send a card notifying the man about the abortion?

From the information in the story, neither one knew the name of the other - so where did she get his address?

“ I ordered her a drink, we exchanged business cards and we fell into meaningless talk” that is how they knew their name and info…

Great intro!