- Incest/Taboo
- 102 Maple Street
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Click hereDarla sat cross-legged, watching television as she folded clothes. Her brothers were playing basketball outside in the driveway. She could hear the thud of the ball as they dribbled up and down in front of the basket hung on the garage. She glanced at the clock, then put down the T-shirt she had been folding. It was time to get them in for supper. Papa would be home soon and she wanted everything to be ready when he arrived. Since their mother had left ten years earlier, Darla had taken on the duties of cook, housekeeper and babysitter.
Looking out the backdoor at her brothers, it was now hard to imagine them ever being that small. Danny was 19 and the image of Papa. Derrick was 20 and a junior at college. Both boys lived at home. Papa wanted it that way. He wanted his kids close by him all the time. Darla called to the boys to come to supper. They dutifully left the basketball and walked toward the backdoor. They had always been obedient, polite boys but with an air of mischief. As Danny walked in, he slapped Darla on the rump and ran into the kitchen. Darla ran after him, catching up to him at the refrigerator. She reached up and ruffled his blond curly hair. He grinned at her and leaned down to kiss her cheek. Derrick walked up behind her and kissed her other cheek. Darla felt flush. The boys had always been very affectionate, but she was shy and it made her uncomfortable. Her blushing face was too irresistible for the boys, so they both kissed her again. Darla shooed them away to go wash their hands. "Papa will be home on a few minutes. Go get yourselves decent for the supper table." Both of her brothers wandered off to wash up.
Darla was humming softly, filling dishes with the evening's meal. She was an excellent cook. The aroma of fresh baked bread and pot roast filled the kitchen. "Smells wonderful, Darla." Papa had walked into the kitchen and had quietly stole up behind his beautiful daughter. She turned and kissed him to welcome him home. His lips lightly touched hers and he put his arm around her waist. "How was your day?" Darla sat a plate in front of her father as he took his place at the table. "It was great. Everything has gone so well today. I have all my work done." He smiled approval at the sparkling clean home. "You work so hard to make a nice home for us all. I am very proud of you. And I haven't forgotten your special day. I have a birthday surprise for you later." Darla smiled at her Papa. He never forgot a birthday. He was the greatest Papa in the world.
The boys joined them at the table. "Happy 23rd birthday, Darla!" The boys shouted in unison, then laughed. Darla giggled at her brothers. "Papa has a surprise for me!"
"We know. We know what it is, too." Danny stuck his tongue out at her, just like when he was a little boy. She giggled again. She was excited and anxious about her surprise. She couldn't wait. Papa noticed how she wiggled in her chair. He watched her twisting back and forth as she ate her dinner. "Sit still, child. Your surprise is coming right after we eat."
After they had all finished eating, Darla got up to do dishes. But the boys took her by the hand and walked her into the living room. "Not tonight, dear sister." Again they spoke in unison. She smiled at them and let them lead her into the living room. Papa was in his chair, waiting for them. "Well, Darla you are all grown up dear. I can hardly believe you are my little girl when I look at you. You have blossomed into a beautiful woman. I want you to know I am proud of you." Darla blushed at her father's words. "I guess you want your surprise now?" Darla nodded "Yes, please." Papa looked at his two boys, who sat on the floor beside Darla's chair. He winked at Derrick, then at Danny. Danny smiled back at him. The boys exchanged and glance and then looked up at Darla. Mischief again danced in their eyes. Darla felt a bit nervous. What were they up to?
Papa crossed his legs and leaned back in his chair. He pulled out his pipe and lit it. He looked again at the boys. He drew a deep breath and then nodded to them. Before Darla knew what was happening, the boys were grabbing her and pulling her to the floor. She was startled and let out a yelp. Danny covered her mouth with his. His tongue plunged deep into her mouth, probing and tasting. Derrick was holding her down to the floor. She started to fight them. She wanted to yell, but couldn't. She felt helpless in their grasp. Danny pulled away from her and smiled an evil smile.
He and Derrick started pull her dress up, revealing her white panties. She looked over at Papa, who was smiling at the event. "Just lay there a let them do it, Darla. Trust Papa. All you women are sluts at heart. Look at your mom. I know you all want cock. I'm giving you what you want. But this way, you won't leave like she did. She went out to chase cock. We're going to show you that you have all the cock you need here." Papa continued to watch the boys as they slide off Darla's panties. She didn't protest any longer. Papa had said to lay still and she did just that. He was always right.
Danny put his fingers on her pussy lips, rubbing them lightly. She felt a tingle of excitement. She looked up at the ceiling, not sure of what to do. Derrick leaned over her body and began unbuttoning her dress. He unhooked the front hook bra and began to rub her tits. He licked one nipple and pinched the other with his fingers. She heard herself moan. It felt good. She felt Danny's fingers slide into her pussy. She felt the wet lips give way to his fingers and again moaned. Derrick began to bite her nipple and pinched harder. Darla moaned louder. Danny leaned over her and pushed his face into her wet cunt. He started licking and sucking on her lips and clit. Darla reached out and grabbed his hair, pulling him in closer. Derrick pulled back from her tits and unzipped his pants. He pulled his cock out and rubbed the hard dick against her face. Darla turned away at first.
Derrick grabbed her face and turned her back toward the waiting cock. He forced it into her mouth, and began fucking her mouth. Darla tried to pull away but felt a slap on her thigh. Papa had moved over to her. He looked at her sternly and she stopped struggling. Derrick began to fuck her mouth faster. She tasted his cock and liked the feel of the precum on her tongue. She started to suck instinctively. Danny was now watching Derrick and his sister. He wanted some of that action. He crawled up to Darla's head and turned it to his dick. He pushed it inside her mouth and fucked her hard. Danny was masturbating as he watched. Darla turned her head toward Derrick and put her hand up for him. Danny fucked her mouth while she masturbated Derrick.
Papa watched his children at play. "Good, good. Fuck her mouth, Danny. Derrick, fuck her hand. Get ready to cum. I want to see that semen shoot out on her tits. I want to see her covered in cum. Darla didn't know why, but she was even more excited by knowing Papa was watching. She was moaning and sucking, fondling the other cock with her hand. Both boys pulled out at the same time, aiming the rock hard cocks at her tits. Cum shot out of their cocks, landing on her tits and her belly. She moaned again as the warm fluid covered her body. Danny and Derrick emptied out their load on her and then sat back on the floor.
Papa stared at the body of his lovely daughter. He smiled at the glistening cum on her tits. He looked over at his boys and gave them another instruction. "Strip her naked. I want to see that ass of hers." The boys willing complied with the command. Darla lay there as they ripped her clothes from her. They rolled her over onto her tummy, exposing the soft ass to Papa. "Time for a birthday spanking, boys." Danny and Derrick took turns spanking their sister's ass. They counted off twenty-three slaps and then each slapped an ass cheek as they counted "one to grow on".
She wiggled under their spanking, but then begged for more. Danny and Derrick looked up at Papa, who nodded agreement. They spanked and spanked Darla as she shouted for more. Papa looked with glee as Darla's ass began to glow red. He kneeled down between her legs and watched the hands spanking and the flesh of her cheeks wiggle. "That's enough, boys. Move over to the couch now. Papa has some things he wants to do to birthday girl."
Derrick and Danny sat on the couch and watched at Papa pulled out his stiff cock. It was huge. Danny and Derrick were well endowed, but nothing to compare with the cock Papa produced. Papa dangled the cock above her ass, touching the tip to her cheeks. He stuck his fingers up her pussy, feeling the wetness. She moaned as he began to fuck her virgin cunt with his fingers. "Hold on, baby. You're going to hide this cock in that tight pussy. Papa lay on top of her and grabbed her hips. He tilted her hips a bit and rubbed his cock against her lips to get it wet.
Without any further movement, he rammed the full length of his 11" deep into the tight pussy of his daughter. Darla let out a yell as she felt the monster cock plunge into her virgin pussy. Papa reached around and put his hand over her mouth. He rammed her harder and harder, fucking her as deep as he could force his dick in her. He held her mouth tightly shut, but she was still heard by her brothers. Derrick leaned over on the couch and called to Papa "Fuck her hard. Make her cum, Papa. Fuck her so hard she can't take it!" Papa was fucking his daughter like streetwalker. He wanted her to feel what real cock could do to her. He felt her body shake and tremble as he fucked her. He felt his cock throb and knew he was ready to cum. "Not yet. Not the pussy this time." Papa whirled her over on her back and forced the cock into her mouth as he shot his load down her throat. "Suck it all, baby. Suck every drop. That's daddy's little girl." Darla swallowed and swallowed all she could. She felt cum dripping down her chin and onto her tits. She thought he would never stop.
Papa stood up, looking at his daughter. He smiled at her. She was beautiful with cum dripping down her chin. He looked over at his boys, who were rubbing their hard cocks as they watched the fucking. "Want more?" He asked his sons. Both boys nodded, ready to fuck their sister. Papa winked at them and they dove off the couch onto Darla's naked body. Derrick forced his cock into her ass, then rolled her on top of him. Danny plunged into her pussy and both boys fucked their sister. Darla moaned and begged for more. They fucked her while Papa watched, happy that his children enjoyed the time together. He sat on the chair and watched them as they rolled around on the floor, exploring new positions, fucking and sucking each other. Papa smiled. It had been a great birthday for his daughter.
- COMMENTS
I have a fantasy to be raped I want to be fucked hard and called a slut and treated like a whole
Definitely trying this with my mum and sisters. Would love to fuck them and shoot my loads down their throats
I wish i could do my sister like that, My father and I occasionally DP my mum, but sis is off limits.
I've got two brothers and a father who would love this story. I can't wait to try it out.
It was so hot to have you brothers and papa give her such a great birthday gift like that. It started out like a rape, but she just gave in like papa told her to do and she like it all. Then papa pounded that pussy out wild. Very HOT!
I would have liked it better if she was raped and didn't like it. But I still got wet from her dad and bros fucking here.
IT WOULD BE BETTER IF SHE WAS RAPED IN DIDNT LIKE IT... BUT DID GET MY PUSSY WET...
She didn't get raped, she loved it. I would like to read more of her being penetrated in all three holes by her brothers and Papa and maybe get some of Papa's dirty friends into her too :)
If you find it so disgusting then why did you read it in the first place. If you don't like stuff like that then don't even look it up.
Rape is discusting
Of course it is illegal and NEVER to be done in real life, but, this subject has been written about for centuries and it is the fantasy of many men and some women. The story is also total fiction and should be treated as such; 'poetic licence' etc! The whole reason for porn, in any form, is to be 'turned on & get off' for both men and women. This story succeeded!
rape is fucked up nasty stupid and a major crime whoever thinks its sexy is fucked up in there head and there parents dropped them to many times on there heads
My stepbrother fucked me last night when he read this. I was a virgin and he shoved his ten inch in me hard for two hours straight in my pussy and then another hour in my ass!!!! I would know cuz if the clock on the night stand
Lolita would love to be part of that family! Just hold me down and make me take it! Oh soo good!
I am a huge fan of incest and taboo. I get wet when I think of my brother, and what I wish he would do to me. Loved it! More with tha brothers pls, it's kinda my thing. ;)
great! fantastic writing! Will be hard for a week after reading this one. As someone who grew up in a family that practiced incest of all types, this story brought back many great memories of sucking and fucking with relatives of both sexes. I was the main bi sexual whore and the "clean up" person to suck the cum that was shot on and in the others. I began when I was a pre-teen by fucking my sister and sucking off my uncles. I really enjoyed watching my mother fuck all the guys while she was sucking pussies. She used to let me sit close to the action and watch her being fucked. I couldn't wait to get old enough to take her myself. Once I became old enough to really participate I fell in love with fucking her while my father, brothers, uncles or others fucked my ass. I very shortly became accepted as the family queer that would give me body to all, any time, any place, any way they wanted it. I became a dedicated full time whore just like my mother and sister. I pimped for them, sucked off their tricks to get the cocks hard and then sucked out the cum. I eventually I got into cross dressing and that added to the thrill for everyone, especially me. I began to feel that I was a woman when I was dressed and taking cocks in my "pussy". I loved it when my father was fucking "Tina" and the rest of the family watching and waiting their turn at me. Many times I'd have two cocks buried in me while sucking the pussy of my mother or sisters. I still, many years later, have sex with family as many of the family as I can as often as I can. I never married since I had no reason to do to. Sex with male or female family members was always available to me. I love it!
The story was hot but it didn't have enough action with the boys. She should have let the brothers each have a turn at her body. Maybe the dad and boys could have helped each other to cement the family as one. She could have taken control and made the rules of the new family on who did what to who and when. Remember that she who takes charge is the one who makes the rules.
really not a very exiting story and actually quite abusive and not at all realistic so over all it was a waste of time
This story got my pussy throbbing! I come on here for some quick, sick stimulation, not an in-depth novel, so kudos to the writer for turning me the hell on! Now I have to go find something to take care of this :)
I will say the double stimulation thing at the end was quite unrealistic - but like I said, I want quick stimulation, not a literary debate, and this story totally works.
I have to disagree, I liked it, it really turned me on and didn't drag out like alot of stories do. I'm all for big dicks shoved in little pussies and every other hole :)
Seriously. This story is quite possibly the worst story I've ever read. I'm all for incestuous rape stories but there was no fight in it. What woman in her right mind for leave a guy who had an 11 inch cock to go looking for a new one? What woman in there right mind wouldn't fight against it at the age of 23 and knowing full well what was going on. I could see if you made it so in the begginning she always followed her fathers orders no matter what or something bad would happen to her but you didn't. This is one of the most under devoleped stories I've ever had the displeasure of reading. I almost stopped reading it but contiuned on in hopes it would get better. It didn't. I'm severly disappointed.
This story has the potentional to be good, but not with you writing it.
lame story, horrible writing style, under-developped characters... I could go on and on...
...and of course it had to be 11 inches, what else? And of course, being a virgin but horny, she had absolutely no problems adjusting to that.
Just stupid!
Rape, and a super-submissive wom--no, girl, despite her age--who is apparently doing nothing with life beyond cooking and cleaning for the men, and apparently now has "graduated" to being their fucktoy as well. Boring, not sexy and one of the most egregious examples of woman hating I've seen on here.
Lots of potential but the awkwardness was a little hard to get around. All in all I dug the idea of the story though.
I loved this story...MORE PLEASE!!! I thought it was great and would love for you to continue the story.
I thought it was ok.. a little short, and akward, and while yes, rape is bad, this is *fiction* and it turned me on ;)
Would love to read more. I do not understand negative comments of those who say it is disgusting. They should have known when entering this section, that this sort of thing would be here. As for me, I loved it, I masturbated as I read it and came more than once. It was rushed alittle but the whole story line is erotic and I love it. Please write more!
I thought it was good but does need more detail you were rushing it a lil. But it still was a good read I think its rude there r people saying ur sick cause u went for a ruffer angle some of us like it that way and I really wouldn't expect people saying she is sick when most people think the whole idea of the fantsy is sick so that makes u sick 4 even thinking about it weather its soft and loving or ruff and hard
im not even going to touch on the subject matter. everyone has their own tastes. the writing style was disappointing. you need to set up your characters a little more. we as readers need to feel an attachment to the family... the fact that it all happened so quickly and brutally leaves me feelin violated. ... in the sense that i dont believe darla was happy about the birthday lovin. however... your story is in the top list... so you must be doing something right.
While the subject matter is controversial, you're going to hear positive and negative feedback. As far as the story itself, you rushed parts which could have used more detail (not graphically as far as the sex went), but background. It seems a little far-fetched that one minute she's trying to escape to she's right into it. That could use more as far as the character goes. You also rush the ending which is unfortunate. It makes me as a reader feel like once the initial sex scene was over you pretty much stopped caring about the story. You've definitely got talent, you shouldn't cut yourself off from a story though. It takes away from what you're trying to say.
I thought it was a good short story plenty of other people have commented on detail. I just wanted to say that it always gets my pussy dripping and I will read it over and over.
Not only did it go from everyone being caring to an utter gang rape and verbal bashing, it also was completely poorly written. Beside this story being garbage what is more shocking is the people on here saying that they wish they had daughters! Really you do? Wow..I can separate fantasy from reality, I hope most of the people on here can too....
Disgusting. Not only was it gang rape, but your female character has been mentally abused most of her life. That is apalling
if only i had a couple of brothers and a dad lke that...great story xxx
How can you others even think its disgusting? The author has expressed a potential rape scene into something beautiful, i never even thought of gang rape when i read this.... Darla obvisouly liked what was happening, silly people, each to their own i supose
Although I abhor forced sex, this story had an erotic core to it. Glad it was written by a woman expressing a rape fantasy, not by a man whom I might have worried was close to the edge in making his fantasy real. AND for the sickos out there who can't easily delineate fantasy from reality. rape is bad! When a woman says no she means no unless it is part of a pre-agreed, pre-arranged fantasy game and there are not many women out there who will play those!!!!
Gang rape wtf..it was a horible story..from family loving it went 2 dispicable acts..filthy male pigs
Big Male Pigs! This could have been a great story with kindness and slow gental manipulation. I could have been sexy a loving.
This is one smoking hot story. I found it very believable and I loved the hot sex that went on between the father,daughter and the brothers. GREAT JOB
How did it go from campy story about family love to a gang rape? I didn't follow...
I'm a girl and this story makes me wish I was in the family! I love the fantasy of group sex with brothers, dad, uncles, cousins, etc. Please add to your story.
This story was great! I actually came while reading it. I only wish you'd gone into more detail, especially at the end when both brothers were doing her at the same time.
There were a few times when names got mixed up, and I think it would have been easier to distinguish between the three if they all didn't start with D's.
This story is hot. I always cum when I read it while I play with my vibrator. great for those lonesome afternoons when hubby is away.
Oh wow. This was so sick and twisted. I loved it. I got so wet just by reading! Well done!
This story is utter crap. The story line is unrealistic and the so called birthday surprise is nothing more than a gang rape and does not fit in with the loving family scenario of the opening paragraphs. The whole story is a confusing mix with the so called loving father punishing his daughter because of his wife leaving him. The story is also very poorly written. I note that the comments that voice approval of the story appear very similar in structure, could they be written by the same person?
Normally I would not comment on drivel such as this,but, the hate directed towards a loving daughter and sister is appalling. I can only rate this story as UTTER CRAP
this was a good story, i enjoyed it, by the way if u think this is sick then dont read it, find something more productive to do, anyway well done keep them coming
this was the sickest shit i had heard aand read, oh god i hope you all rot in hell for thinking of such sick shit and fucking wastn time!
Can't tell you how much I love this story. The more I read it the more excited I go. I just wish it went on a little longer. But it does it job.
This story was so exciting. I just loved the way that you described the father ... his attitude totally fit this story. I'm so wet right now ... I wish it was happening to me that I could have unlimited sex. Amazing story!!
It has slight potential, but seemed a tad unrealistic to me. There should have been more resistance and more detail. Also, some develoment between the brothers wouldn't go unappreciated. Maybe a family orgy with the dad and daughter as the focus, while the brothers do their own thing with each other. Altogether, if you are going to write a faily rape story you need to develop both the family and rape aspects more, or not use them at all. And I thought the ages were reversed. The daughter should be the young one.
I remember my brother and dad fucking me one night....please don't stop writing them
I loved this story, I wanted to stop reading, but could not help myself, I had to read on to the end! I am so fucking horny now! I would write more, but I can't, cuz I need to go now and masturbate the shit outa myself while imagining Papa and my two younger brothers fucking the crap outa me! MMM thanks! Keep on writing!
I loved it... wish I had brothers and a dad.. and the virgin=blood doesn't necessarily hold true.. I lost my hymen when i was younger from horses when I use to help train them.. so when I lost my virginity .. there was no blood..
If only more families were like that. A girl could get all of the cock she wanted at home and then some.
If the man and his sons are going to rape her, why not follow through and make them hold a razor to her/cut her breasts or something? It may make you feel guiltier after climax. but it is what you want.
Happy Birthday sis! I've got 1 for you too. Well, I did. It's gone, now! I did have it, though. I thought that was a freat story Czarina. Keep writing about family loving. It's my favorite genre. This was one of the best stories in this classidication, too! I'm going to re-read it again. Nicely written, by the way.
Oh my god i love this story........ I cudnt stop playin with myself. I am wet jst thinkin about it.
keep writin!
I have been reading these stories all night, and I ama mature woman, and I am so turned on by these stories. I will continue to read them as long as you continue to write them. I love family stories like that. also I would like to hear about animal's and their owners. having sex.
You have a nice way of holding the readers attention and building a nice climax. smiles, noveltask
i have always fantasised about several men fucking me at the same time and getting covered in cum, this story enhanced that for me.
All I can think of at this point is Mercy! What a picture you painted. Need more!
It gave me a huge hardon. I really got into the story and could see myself fucking her. My prick got a lot of play out of this story. I read it three times in a row just for my pricks sake. I know I will read it again. Keep them cumming Czarina.
Hardon John
Real hot story. A definite pussy soaker...at least for me. Keep up the good work.
This has got great intent, though i guess Darla's emotions are a bit too controlled, I think she would continue to fight for a bit longer, and I doubt she would enhoy it THAT much
I loved It I really want too learn about It, I would'nt mind trying It.
Not what it could have been. Lacks depth of emotion. Try again and you will have it
The basic idea of this story was a real turn on but the writing did lack a bit.
Some parts were really hot but it needed more... I guess the word is depth, sexy but empty, you could tell it was amateur (no offense intended).
I have just started getting into the incest/ rape fantasy thing. I loved this story. I hope you keep writing.
this was a really nice story, the ppl who said rape and incest r crimes should really read this,they'd probably even get hot off this, at heart this is wut ppl want, rape and incest r truly a perfect combination, i wish there was more 2 read, and coz she was a virgin made me even hotter, thnx 4 the story, its great.
i don't know about the others who commented..but i loved your story...incest/rape is a great combo...I liked the whole thing...I just wish it was a little longer and that's only because i really enjoyed it...i hope i see more stories like this in the future..keep writing..i'll be looking for them...
Sorry, Czarina, there was nothing here about the girl and "her birthday". It was all about macho men and covert rape. Men saying how the girl liked it. Whmm! I wonder how they pleased her to assess that! This was just a re-run of a porno film I've seem, I think!
Too much back story, not enough action. When reading erotica, I guess I prefer to get to the nitty gritty pretty quick.
And folks who complain about "rape" and "incest" have no business being here. This is all fantasy. Nothing more.
I thought this was a really good attempt! The only bad thing I do have to say is that it was a bit short and needed some more details, otherwise it was really good! It got me horny.
it was quite interesting actually at first it was weird made me wet.....
First of all to the silly person who said "Rape is wrong it's a crime" Isn't incest also a crime? Isn't incest also wrong? you should think over what you are leaving on feedback, it is supposed to be positive feedback this means criticising points yes,...but only to point out parts the author should or could improve upon next time.
To rubbish a story just because you dont like a certain aspect of it, i feel, is very immature.
Now my note to the author,...Very good attempt! I have to agree with the comments on the boys ages, sometimes in a story i find it best to leave out ages and let people imagine for themselves, if you prefer to give ages i like to draw upon my personal experience of how i looked at sex at that age. Also i think a little resistance from the daughter is needed in this story to make a little more believable. All in all a good short story, hope to hear lots more from you! Nichola x
Your story is fine. You should have put it in NonConsent and you wouldn't have had the negative feedback from the people that don't like rape stories. Although it was about incest, rape was a big part of it also. D'Angela
I do have to say one thing about it that I didnt like it was too short I wanted more, but the story was still very good, thank you I hope therese a continuence.
although it seemed a sexy story it lacked detail it needed to be longer, and tht sort of thing just dosent happen! there are betta storys on ere u betta read them to get a good idea!
It's not big and is not clever.
Rape at its worst. Made my stomach turn.
The worst incestous story I have ever read.
If that is the writer finds a turn on, he/she should probably be in a mental institute away from society.
Disgusting
uh it really sucked rape is just stuid and its a crime and the boys were imature and no sister unless they wer really messed up would like lay there and do that shit
It sucked, Rape is a crime, not sexy. The guys didn't act their age the story most likely not real.There are better ones on here.
Boring, needs more detail. She wouldn't have laid there. B ohys were to imature.
I agree with anonynous USA, would have been good for the father to have sex with the sons also, family orgy as such hot, hot
rape is sexy and after all they didnt hurt her she liked it just wish dad would come back for some more ..
let dad have her again maybe get her preg.
I'm sorry - but I didn't really think this was too believable. The boys are 19/20 and she is 23. Are we really expected to believe that she was meek as all that and the boys, who acted like kids when she told them to come in from playing, did it so meekly?
This was the perfect fantasy for a twisted girl like me, Thanks!!
She should have been seduced, instead of 'forced' into it.. A higher score would result.
Something like her brothers showing their penis outlines through their shorts, more kissing, and sneaky strokes on her body. Get her hot; not 'make' her hot. And father should have been first, to turn her on to sexual feelings for them.
I think there should have been more build up to the action, more hesitation from the daughter. Not anything brutal, but more reserved. That's just me though, great story.
Boring. Rape is never sexy, as the other person (far more articulate than me) put it.
I thought there should should have been a little more going on with Dad and the brothers befor the daughter was involved despite it being her birthday.