All Comments on '14 Months 15: May'

So glad to see an update. Your story is on par with another fantastic series...The Twelve Tables Trilogy. Unfortunately we lost the author before the 3rd part could be finished. Your characters are well rounded and the plot is intriguing. I am infatuated with Jack...he is just what Sophie needs. His motivation is driven by love and he is stronger in character than the other bozos who claim to care for her. I would like to see him rewarded for his selflessness. They are so good together. No do overs with the other two dicks please!

I hope you and yours are keeping well, after all we’re currently cursed to live in interesting times. I must admit it’s crossed my mind a few times thinking that I’m probably just being weird by being concerned about the welfare of my favourite authors on an erotic story website. It’s probably not normal but then again, normal is seriously overrated.

Truly breathtaking! It’s such a vibrant intense story, I absolutely love it. All of the drama, tragedy, there’s something for everyone in this story. The story just leaps off the page, I genuinely admire your talent. Thanks for sharing your ideas/ stories.

Tess (UK)

Really enjoying this story especially the twists of the storyline and plenty of characters.

I’d love to see Maeve mentor Sophie to become a powerful independent woman who could then have great sex with whomever she wanted, including having a threesome with Asher & Darius, and enjoying sleeping with Jack and Zander as well. Would be cool to see that as it would twist the power dynamics on their head and give her power and agency while still having hot submissive sex!

Anyway that’s just my take, really interested to see where this story goes, please keep writing!

When do we get another chapter??

I truly hope that you continue the Sophia Saga. I love the whole series. It would be cool to see her become an international sensation musically and then using the money to take her place as the head of the Calabrese family and bring them into the 21st century. Being Sophie, she would retain her natural submissive nature between the sheets. PLEASE NEXT CHAPTER ASAP!

I can't wait for you to write the next chapter! Great story so far, and I will be sad if you never find the time to finish it.

Great addition to the story, I was genuinely buzzed when I found this addition. I hope everything is ok in your world.

It would be great to have Sophie and Jack settled together as a couple away from all the bullshit politics of the Alliance and other organisations.

Your hard work is appreciated, thanks for sharing.

Tess (uk)

I love reading this story. But please can you do 1 thing for me? Please make her happy with a new guy. One that does not use the word mine. And when she is happy, please let her kiss him while Zander is watching.

Keep up the good work.....

Regards

M

please come back, this is one of the best stories I’ve read on lit.

Please continue this story

Please continue!

I vote for Sophie and Jack

Oh man. I should not have started this without checking to see if it was finished. Please come back and finish this.

This is absolutely one of my favorite stories. Please finish😎

Really awesome story, real shame it's unfinished.

Strand

Please, please finish the story, I have thoroughly enjoyed it and want lots more.

Come on, don't leave the aussie story unfinished

It is finished : she either goes on her own or she goes back to Dauris.