All Comments on 'A Bad Influence Ch. 03'
by EmeliaBell
- 13 Comments
I love them...they are such great characters and I want them to be together in their sweet D/s relationship...so hot!
i wish the virgin that i started to train would have done that to me but i guess i picked the wrong kind of guy.... very hot story.. keep it cumming!!!
Silly story. Does anyone believe this? I know this is fantasy; but why must the dialogue be so wooden.
After reading this I think I'll go buy some cuffs and a whip! Great story. Please continue... But I've got to wonder about the mind that dreams up these stories! Yumm!
...to hit your latest release and instead I found myself drawn to finish your old series first. The sex here seems more realized than the characters, true. But the sex is <b>quite</b> well-realized indeed. I'm very curious now to read something you've written more recently, to see what has changed in your style, if anything.
I really dug the "aggressive" part--where its an angry sex for a bit.
You stopped it there? Really? Come on I'm all for cliffhangers but we need another chapter I want to know what else he does to her. Does another guy show up like in her fantasy? How does she react when she finds it's him. Please add to the story
Aaahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! My boyfriend needs to read this and get a few ideas!