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FenixroninFenixroninover 14 years ago
Major Grammar problems

I liked the actual story line itself, it was fairly well thought out and the beggining has a lot of potential to be developed but the grammar and spelling problems killed it. You need to have someone edit this or revise it yourself so that it is less confusing to read.

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