All Comments on 'A Nightcap for Marie'

It is physically impossible for a normal human male to penetrate a normal human female's cervix with his cock. The cervix is tightly closed to a very small opening that only fluids can pass through with any ease and only enlarges normally during childbirth. Also, the angle of it is such normally that except during childbirth it's also not even possible to aim against it ... it's pointing the other way. I stopped reading after you started writing about penetrating the cervix. It might be an exciting idea but it's just not believable. It ruined an otherwise very hot story. The details of the seduction are delicious up to that point.

Apart from one error about the cervix, this is a sweet, tender love story, beautifully written, although it would be better placed in the Romance category.