All Comments on 'A Pack Of His Own (Ch. 01)'

The Werewolf aspect is fairly obvious, but thats just being picky. Otherwise good and hot

Thanks for sharing this story! Looking forward to the next part.

I think it'd be hilarious to pull a 'bait and switch' and find out that the whole story has nothing to do with werewolves, and it was all just a huge red herring.

So he is part werewolf I take it?

This is a super small detail, and only few people would even catch it, but no one at the University of Colorado, in my time at Boulder called the school UCB. That's either the Upright Citizens Brigade, or the University of California at Berkeley. We either called it CU, or just Boulder.

Great start! I look forward to reading more. I’m a big fan of your work and this seems like it’s going to be another great series. Thanks for sharing!

A good and enjoyable start to another storyline. Keep up the good work. It’s not like you don’t have enough storylines to juggle already…

Very good. More please.

Another excellent start to, hopefully, an excellent series.

Great setup as always. Hot finish. Looking forward to the story fleshing out.

Nice job. I like stories with character development.

HOWL !!!!!!

What a great start to a tale can't wait for the next installment

Lycan, yes. were something , yes. wolf is yet to be determined though it would be typical. Lacey is now Wills' alpha female though I suspect their relationship will evolve in more ways. Of course since Will bit Lacey, she will become were as well.

We will see . But you have me hooked . Well done .

Just trippy. Love the beginning.

Just for fun, could you make him a were-lion? Or something other than a wolf?

Great start. Looking forward to more. But it is NOT UCB. My first week there it was made clear this was CU. Go Buffs!

Great start. Hoping for many more chapters...

Excellent start, cannot wait until the next chapter

5/5

Great start, I'm interested it what happens next...Alpha male with his queen bitch and following beta pack or alpha male with harem of bitches and hangers-on...

Great start, looking forward to next instalment.

Keep it coming - I love this start. Thx!

Love to see where this continues

Hot hot hot. Eager for the next chapter

Yes this has the makings of a great story looking forward to more chapters

More, please...

And hopefully, soon.

It seems obvious (to me, but I can be gullible) where he's heading on the narrative path. I'm really looking forward to seeing if Lacey is just along for the ride or if that bite will have consequences.

Don't stop now!!!! Love it.

Don’t stop it has the making of a good storyline.

This is really good but I had to go back here from chapter two to refresh my memory of who everyone is, and the chapters aren't linked to one another which makes navigation difficult.

It is CU, Boulder. Never UCB.

I see only two chapters to this, so I have a feeling disappointment is going to be rampant at the end of chapter 2.

This chapter was fun...detailed enough to set the stage for this encounter between Will and Lacey...

East European blood in his veins...something primal there...

Five**5**Stars...Yyyaaayyy!!!!!

Looking good.

Like the story so far.

Thank you for bringing in to the world.

Here I am. Even though it's not really my type of story. We will see how long it holds my attention.