All Comments on 'A Reversal of Fortune'
by coollvr1
- 9 Comments
WHAT HAPPENED TO THSI STORY WAS SUPPOSED TO BE ABOUT INCEST BUT ALL YOU WROTE ABOUT WAS THE RAPE OF HIS MOTHER BY A FRIEND OF HER FATHER ?????
YOU NEVER TOLD THE STORY ABOUT THE MOTHER AND SON..................
ARE YOU GOING TO TELL THAT STORY OR WHAT?????
It is very seldom that I rate a story as a Five ( 5 ).
You write well and offer a female perspective that EVERY YOUNG MAN SHOULD READ !
So many young women get a wham bam forgot to say thank you introduction to sex.
This, is a recommended read.
OKaaay! Minor tri-muff occurring here not only with a misdirected title and category miscorrelation but then with the story repeated - thinking this author must be having a bad day!
Still, the opening paragraph did begin with a potentially inferred incestuous scene that alas, never eventuated. But! We did, for reasons unknown, get a full exposé on his mother's unfortunate delving into unprotected sex.
Methinks, someone slipped out of the wrong side of their bed.