All Comments on 'Acting 101 Ch. 04: Thrill Rides'

This series is amazing! One thing I noticed is that you've described Meredith's appearance in detail at this point but not so much for Steff.. I don't think I properly understood what her hair looked like until you said it was a bob in this one. Anyway keep it up!

Thank you so much. I’ve put a lot of work into this one.

That said, there may be a reason for how the narrator describes other characters…. I’m glad you’ve noticed.

This installment was incredibly . . . human. It was also far too brief.

Not much more to say, but I just felt bad that this outstanding work of short, erotic prose had so few comments.

Keep on keeping on.

Our protagonist is a fool...Award Steff the victory as gracefully as possible and take the prize.

Short but sweet! Got to disagree with ray, I'm hopeful he can pull off long term with both girlfriends. Their differences are interesting, Mer's sophisticated and relentless, while Steff's comfortable and sexy and a best friend around the same age... Different kinds of connections, both great

This series is so good I didn't remember a bit of this episode -- and I gave it (as the others) five stars!