All Comments on 'All Ashore Ch. 06'

Your writing is outstanding! I've read everything you've posted and look forward to more. You are one of the best writers on this site without a doubt!

Your writing is outstanding! I've read everything you've posted and look forward to more. You are one of the best writers on this site without a doubt!

I have read this series, and enjoyed it. Insightfull writing, interesting characters, good plot as well as plot twists. This last episode featured several well-turned passages which were a little "flippant" or "edgy", and they worked great. In toto, the sex scenes were varied, and had something for everyone, even though not everyone would like every scene. Puddinhead Wilson!!!! (For those not familiar with Mark Twain..."It is difference of opinion that makes a horse race")Write On!

what an awesome series. What a fantastic erotic writer you are, this story got me hot and kept me there. Sorry to see it end!! Please continue with Tara's adventures!!

I really thought you were going to develop her subbie side... it seemed like you flirted with it a couple times.

I love the way you brought so many aspects of her exploration into play and included/developed the exploration of some of the supporting characters... overall a wonderfully written piece... thank you so much for sharing with us!

Again, you have provided a story for almost everyone. I enjoyed Tara and her development and the sex scenes were wonderful and sometimes over the top but that's what I enjoyed about them. I loved the strong relationship you built between Tara and Keira. Everyone should be lucky enough to have such support.

Right now, my bottom is twitching. Maybe it's time to try using it.

I've enjoyed most of your stories. This one, however, is my favorite kind of story ... something about the tone ... delightfully human, in the most positive way. A few tears, lots of chuckles, and a beautiful blossoming of a beautiful soul ... oh the ripples such souls have. Thank you.