- Romance
- Almost Caught!
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Click here"I guess Rory made a clean getaway," I finally blurted.
How lame.
"Like I really give a rats ass?" Jan answered.
Shit. I had totally fucked things up. Fifteen years of friendship down the drain. The best and worst day of my life, all in a span of 30 minutes. I could at least be a man about it. I wasn't going to let her see me cry. Not this time.
She reached over and took my hand, and lead me back between the houses. When we got to our yards, she turned left heading toward her place, still pulling me along by the hand.
"My parents won't be home for hours. Let's see if it's half as good, with a real bed under us. And this time, let me breathe when I'm coming."
It was going to be an awesome summer.
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- COMMENTS
That was great! I could feel the heat and sweat, and Jan’s tight little body! Been there, but not right there. Desire delayed, the right circumstances, and damn! Thanks!
Maybe my third time, and still love it, your description of her body-LOVE petites...!
...both crazy horny...will be even better in a proper bed, after a shower, him able to recharge in minutes...
easy five/fave...
Great story, invested from near the start. I'm a bit confused by the reviews criticizing the non-character girlfriend of 8 weeks. A barely experienced 19 year old with his best friend of 15 years. These two things aren't comparable. I felt those facts made the story more believable. The sexy naked neighbor is an author setting up for sequels and drama. Easy to make that leap with teenagers to boot. Full or hormones and inexperienced.
5 Stars as I also have skinny dipped with my best friend's sister . She was not a Virgin but sadly she was a pain in the ass .
Commenters are saying there’s no romance. I disagree. Being friends since childhood creates a sense of intimacy. Allowing each other to express physically what they’ve likely considered many times… holding the trust that their friendship will survive it, and the added dimension to their relationship will only strengthen it. If that isn’t a love story, I don’t know what is. - This was much hotter than the first time I read it.
A little shallow in the telling but a 5 star tale nevertheless. A fun tale & a bit of a break from the terribly intenseness of the longer tales.
Bill S.
Excellent story, well told. I like the fact that our hero has misgivings and gets hard at small tits and big tits. I also like fact that they got caught, which is more what would happen in real life.
A romance? Seriously, I couldn't think of a better category for this than erotic couplings.
A romance would have described the special relationship Jan and Derek have, just like the author did. But the guy either hadn't had a girlfriend or he'd at least part ways with her after he came together with Jan.
A big NO is the outlook of impending swapping.
Being just a detail in the scheme of things, Derek compared the fake tits of the daughter of the house with Jan's natural titties, concluding he liked the latter much better, as do I. After being caught he suddenly changes the assessment, calling the mature couple the epitome of beauty and sexiness, this time including the fake tits. I'd call this an inconsistency, one that results for me in sharing the guy's taste at first only to hit a wall when he changes his mind 180°.
On a side note, the way Jan's mammaries are described, small but with big (puffy) areola and nipples, they are likely still in the process of growing...
The guy already has a girlfriend and he works for half the salary of his colleagues.
Not exactly a stand up genius.
very likable characters...young and horny..
like all boobs, esp petites, but sounds he might get to try some prime ex-lg soon...f
definitely think he should volunteer to to relieve her of her remaining cherry...
Damn, no tears from this story but it sure is cute! Kinda reminds me of my first time, sure showed me how wonderful the female could be .......
Didn't like the hint of them swapping. Would have liked there to be some more romance in the aftermath.
It would be a big shame if they didn't end up together permanently.
I love a Romance, but see none here. The story hints strongly at swapping with Denise and her man. There is no love when there is swapping, is just lust and a fuck fest...
They were caught and put in the bait box for future use. Truly, I was suprised that the walls of the playhouse stood up under the pressure. It sounded as if there would be more in their friendship down the road.