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Click hereI couldn't help it, I couldn't help myself. I gave a little cry of: "Oh god!" and I came hard, spasming around the finger embedded in my tight sex as my clit throbbed under my thumb.
I began to sob, full body-shaking sobs. What had I become that I could orgasm when he was saying words like that to me.
"Good girl. Dirty girl. Daddy's words really seem to have an effect on you. Dr. Lau's conditioning really seems to be working. We will have to ensure she is properly rewarded?"
Mr. Croker must have seen the shock and terror on my face as the meaning of his words hit home because he said: "What? Were you that stupid as to think that Daddy's only modification was going to be tightening your cunt? The most important element in sex is the mind Anne-Marie. You'd be a fool to think I wouldn't want to modify the way you think before you began your 400 days of being my forced whore. Now be a good girl and clean Daddy's cock and zip it up when your done. I'll see you in three days time for your first fucking."
Tears pouring down my face, my saltwater mixing with the salt of semen that plastered me, I did as I was told. I was utterly broken. I no longer even knew if I was me. Had Mr. Croker and Dr. Lau really brainwashed me into being a whore?
- COMMENTS
"You move like a dead body being dropped down some stairs by the undertakers. How are you going to strip on stage when you can't even strip for Daddy?"
So many fabulous passages. Here Mr. Croker may be telegraphing to Anne-Marie that she will indeed be stripping on stage in front of an audience. Her dreams of engaging in depraved and perverted sex acts may too be a foretaste of what is to come. I doubt if Dr. Lau picked those out of a hat when she implanted those thoughts in Anne-Marie's subconscious.
I really like Anonymous’s last comment, especially the part where he/she states that “the hypnotic training will allow Anne-Marie “to slowly come to terms with her changes by not acknowledging her complicity in the process - she can cope better thinking of it as something being done to her rather than something she is actively participating in.” And yes, the story is both fabulous and believable.
I'm surprised too see so many comments about how hypnosis could not achieve what is described here. It's really not that far-fetched. Yes, hypnotherapy cannot forcibly alter someone's mind, but that isn't necessary in these conditions. Our MC is in an incredibly traumatic and stressful situation, so she needs only have part of her hypnosis emphasize that submitting to and embracing the hypnotic training will allow her to cope better with her predicament. This includes "losing" the specific memories of the conditioning process, as that better allows her to slowly come to terms with her changes by not acknowledging her complicity in the process - she can cope better thinking of it as something being done to her rather than something she is actively participating in.
The hypnotherapy aspects of this story are both perfectly believable and quite erotic. I'm loving this tale, and looking forward to future chapters!
Hypnotherapy doesn't alter your mind, it makes subliminal suggestions to help when needed. She could still choose between what she knows as right and wrong.
I have to admit I love this story. I read the first part to understand the situation and premise then skipped to #4. I could still follow it and love how she is being trained and manipulated. Great job.
Some readers seem to confuse other readers' comments with the author's story. Readers may speculate all they want, but the author writes the story, determines its content and trajectory, and defines the characters. If the author is not interested in readers' speculations as to what might happen in subsequent chapters, she will ignore them. If the author finds them helpful, then great. Of course the author can turn off the comments at will. Readers too are not obliged to read other readers' comments, and can offer their own interpretation of the story to date. If they have nothing constructive to say, best say nothing. For me this story has triggered my imagination as to where it could go. Less well conceived and well written stories don't do that.
With all the demands that will soon be put on her body, I anticipate that Anne-Marie will be working out daily in a gym and doing a lot of running. Mr. Croker does not want her to be just an ordinary whore, stripper, or porn actress, able to handle multiple cocks, but to be his "perfect," big titted, very fit, toned, and shapely whore. For this her body must be up to the tasks he has set out for her in the months ahead.
26-year old Anne-Marie now has the slim body of a much younger woman, and with her small 34B tits, could pass for a virginal schoolgirl. But Mr. Croker wants a big-titted but very youthful-looking whore he can dress as a schoolgirl. Soon I expect Anne-Marie will have her tits significantly enlarged; on her slender and petite frame and they will look huge. Perfect for displaying, stripping, and filming ("Busty schoolgirl gets gangbanged"?).
Tattoos and piercings on her slim and now busty body further announce that Mr. Croker's "perfect whore" is ready for service.
In reading these comments, instead of being a director of this story, you should make the effort of writing your own...I'm sure with all these ideas, it would be fantastic! I would give it a 5
At some point I can imagine Mr. Croker taking Anne-Marie to a BDSM sex club where she be the featured entertainment with both men and women. She will a special treat for the. club members and will subjected to the most
perverted sexual abuse. By this time her hypnotherapy will have normalized such acts in her mind .and Anne-Marie will orgasm multiple times in front of the enthusiastic audience. She will crave more of the twisted and degraded sexual pleasure, but will be sufficiently aware of what she is becoming to hate Mr. Croker, her husband, and herself. Perhaps she also could come to hate the thought that she might embrace what she is becoming.
Anne-Marie is working on her cocksucking skills, despite her anger at what she is being forced to do. However, the hypnotherapy is working and soon she will be looking
forward to getting Mr. Croker's cock in her mouth and down her throat. She may be horrified if she orgasms just from him cumming in her throat, but will want it again.
Once Mr. Croker has taken Anne-Marie's anal
cherry, perhaps he could arrange a gangbang to celebrate her "coming out" by having
all her holes filled at the same time - over and over.
It would be great to read that Anne-Marie becomes a fit (from constant gym workouts), tanned, and very big titted stripper and lap dancer. Tattoos and piercings would give her a sluttish and exotic look that would draw a bigger audience. Of course she would be entertaining customers as called upon in a private VIP room, further cementing her new whorish life. She would love how aroused she gets from displaying her gym-fit and toned enhanced naked body to an audience even as her mind is in turmoil about what she has become. Her constant need to be fucked and for orgasms still confuses her.