by TitManDDo
Thank You.
Not sure if you'll read this since it has been a while from your last submission and now but I just wanted you to know that this is amazing. Your story line, your characters, the sex. You truly did make me feel horny with just your words. Thank You!
It became overboard on the sex. Story is great on its own without every lick chronicled
Didn't finish this one. The whole thing becomes boring. You're a great writer. IMHO you should concentrate more on quality and less on quantity. And the creep writer is playing w/a lot of young girls' heads. So i don't personally like this protagonist. Likable protagonists go a long way!