by Voboy
The costume scene was my favorite part. I would like to see a real relationship with tori
Many possibilities and one missed opportunity. Missed the opportunity for the cop to turn Tori's rival into a confidential informant and their personal bitch using the video of drug dealing. Also, see Tori and cop colloaborating on conquest of all Tori's friends for personal entertainment, including videos to watch together later.
Fantastic writing, I really enjoyed the point-of-view of the cop, and his internal monologuing - as well as all the well-written sex scenes, of course. Is there a sequel planned?
Mike is delightfully crude and irresponsible which makes for some fun adventures. I especially enjoyed his chemistry with Tori, who is a good foil for him. I find I want to know much more about her, what made her so cunning and practical? I am enjoying imagining that Olivia knows exactly how unscrupulous and non-monogamous Mike is, and she doesn't care because she is too. That would make them perfect for each other. Thanks for the fun characters!