by hickoryfarmer
This is such a great little story with big ramifications. A brilliant gem.
How you managed this, I don't know: the pacing is Chandleresque (as well as the cynicism) and the back-stories minimised with surgical skill. And the construction's breath-taking. If you aren't already published, you damn well should be. Thanks for the ride, down Ohio way.
Stunning, a woman who can capture an obscenity and make it somewhat beautiful. The brutality of group sex and yet the magic of pure lust/love...Well done
This is a very well written story......but very troubling.............a horrible realization, perhaps that I know this woman, this Sue...that names and places were not changed........and that is a tragedy