All Comments on 'Best Friend's MILF Ch. 02'

The sex is great. The clarity and spelling and missing words, not so much. It appears to be a first draft of a good story. If you would reread and correct it, it would be a 4 or even a 5.

You really need an editor, especially for glaring mistakes like the relationship between Rachel and Ellie. First Ellie is Rachel's friend, then she's her sister, then her twin sister, and finally her little sister. Keep writing though. You do have some talent for this.

Difficult read please get an editor! Thanks for sharing.

Liked the story, but the unnatural size of the parts is a turn off to me.

WOW now that was HOT thanks 4 the nut...... 100% HOT....

Please let someone else do the proof reading. Good story.

I must have missed something from the first chapter. I could not figure out who half of these people are.