by TAHammer
This story, that started out so Hot, has never reached that level of chapter 2 again! It has been so rushed, from bed to alter way too fast to be real, and now Bobby and best friend Malcolm are betraying newly married Clay! If this is some kind of a dream or a joke... It is not one bit funny! It got a 1 from me!! Sadistically Pathetic!! Not my cup of tea at all! Slow stuff down and write a believable story!