All Comments on 'Boy Scout'
by Griscom
- 382 Comments (Page 3)
Griscom, your story is way OTT BTB. (I wonder how many 'pick-axe handles' that warrants.)
Meanwhile, there are zero characters with whom the reader can sympathize, much less admire. The legal and financial shenanigans are not at all likely to survive the glare of a rational examination.
Also, major kudos for the scene where the MC arrives early in the morning when both cheaters are in the house, but he pretends to be unaware. That may become a new trope for LW Lit stories.
Quite well written and good consistent pacing. Overall, an enjoyable story in a cringe-worthy fashion.
Keep 'em comin'.
Epic.
Truly fucking epic burning of a cheating spouse.
Just improbable enough at actually be believable.
You can burn something with a magnifying glass on a sunny day. It kind of melts. Or you can use matches, and get a nice little bonfire going. But nothing is as satisfying as using a flamethrower while adding napalm as an accelerant. This was a flamethrower on steroids. Satisfying? Hell yeah!
Wow the was one hell of a BTB story. Just shows it's good to have friends in low places as well as high. You think he was a little unreasonable not even listening to his wife's excuses? Hell no. Cheaters deserve what they get. Too bad my ex over 40 years ago didn't get what she deserved. I am a believer in 'what goes around comes around' though sometimes it takes awhile.
Great story.
Beautiful!!! I heard that that tattoo removal does leave scares. To bad! Apparently, she didn't know Boy Scouts have lots of friends. Good job. Keep writing.
XYZ
WAY OVER THE TOP. THIS WAS CRIMINAL SICK REVENGE. a terrible outcome for a cheating wife. he got his revenge without resorting to causing injury and pain to both cheaters.
WHOA she pretty much got exactly what she deserved. Fortunately The Lord will forgive us if we ask, cuz most of us never get what we really deserve until judgement. 5 stars for writer. I love a happy ending.
In a world (Literotica) of cream pie eating RAAC cucky boys, be a Nick instead....
A brisk read, with only one nitpick, but it is a pet peeve of mine. Why would Linda, who is supposed to be intelligent, have sex with Dwayne in her home and not his? Dwayne is single, so there is no reason not to, and Linda is taking a huge risk by having her lover come over where family, friends or a neighbor could drop by unexpectedy. I realize it's a convenient way for the writer to record things to get proof, but just once I'd like to an explanation for this idiotic choice used in story after story.
Evil, that makes a good boy scout, I was raised in scouts and yes, we were evil. Mostly to each other but still evil. Great story.
The only criticism was it's brevity and pacing when revenge is this sweet savour the experience!
Great story. The sudden offer on his house might seem unbelievable but I get calls every day from people who want mine. I do think Nick was too tough on Sven. He gave Nick time off and then Nick told him to fuck off. That wasn't right. Nick also missed out on suing Linda's firm. They would have settled.
Bitch burnt with nasty ink/broken nose, wedding photos burnt, damn good payback!
Always good to have friends in "low places"!
Nice and slow revenge. No need to be a murderer. Just make them suffer living.
That was an excellent story, the best btb I’ve read so far. That revenge was so cold it was served in the frozen north.
Enjoyed the story. Shows what a "Boy Scout" can accomplish. Thanks for your writing.
I have an answer for this question. Anonymous3 months ago
A brisk read, with only one nitpick, but it is a pet peeve of mine. Why would Linda, who is supposed to be intelligent, have sex with Dwayne in her home and not his? Dwayne is single, so there is no reason not to, and Linda is taking a huge risk by having her lover come over where family, friends or a neighbor could drop by unexpectedly. I realize it's a convenient way for the writer to record things to get proof, but just once I'd like to an explanation for this idiotic choice used in story after story.
The answer is that the woman prefers to have sex in her own bed. All women do, that why this forum is full of cheating wives who have sex in their own beds (husbands bed for disrespect of the husband).
I loved it. Not only was the BTB one of the best I've read, but having friends in low places does help when you need it. :-)
It was funny at times too. Loved how the story unfolded. I gave it 5 stars.
To the anonymous that had respect for Nick killed by the tattoos. Read the story, Nick had nothing to do with the tattoos. Just the broken nose and black eyes.
Great story, not sure about any of the legal stuff
And where was the boyfriends car during the "honey I'm home segment"
A very-well-written Loving Wives comedy classic curiously posted in the Non-Erotic category. Can only imagine that many keyboards have been organically rendered inoperable in BTB households around the globe.
For those saying this story is fake, they would be WRONG, this really happened, well not the black eyes and nose, but the woman did have "I AM A CHEATER" tattooed across her forehead.
Great !!!! I would have gone for magic marker or just some ink that would wash off or wear off in a couple of weeks.
Brutal. Not sure I understood his past relationship with Maggie? They were friends, then became lovers? But then split because he found Linda? And she demanded he not interact with Maggie?
Harsh but well written. Hard to imagine the wife, a lawyer herself, was stupid enough to sign all those documents. But hey she trusted her husband and had her lover hiding upstairs. Massive burn. The house stuff seemed excessive.
We really need a new category for over-the-top-100%-down-to-the-ground comedic burns like this. You and Vandemonium1 should be among the founding members, of course. :-) This story was spectacular!
One of the (IF NOT) the BEST BURN THE BITCH stories EVER! The degenerate, creampie eating CUCKS, "cheating WHORE wife Apologist", Limp Dick GIRLY MEN and their Three Hole Cum Dump Wives are screaming at their monitors and pounding on their keyboards while giving you a 1 Star! Unfortunately just like their pathetic marriages ..... it's not working (4.65 score as of 1/16/2023)! A win for the good guys!
Well Done Griscom!
Second time I read this gem. Made me laugh out loud. Thanks, Griscom. Absolutely 5 stars. Tanglosax
Wow what a psycho!
Maggie seems to be the typical moth who's attracted to the flame but thinks she won't get burned. Poor Maggie! You should've ran when you saw what he's capable of.
As subtle and as effective as a blunderbuss at close range. Liked it a lot!.
reread for me and this belongs in the TOP ten list of BTB stories. I would have settled for India Ink Tattoos that would have in a couple of months worn off.
A fine story overall; I'm all for BTB when it's warranted as it clearly is in this case but I find myself disturbed by the author's attitude to violence against women. The house sale and demolition is a nice touch, though.
I can just imagine the outrage from the anonymous (with their multiple profiles) simp beta bitches... 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Loved this story. Wife thinks she can do as she pleases with no effects. He asked her not to go on that trip & she laughed in his face. The anom below who thought the BTB’s unwarranted- I suppose he’d wait 4 her with open arms while saying how not nice she was. Bullshit! He took his hurt, abandonment, & betrayal a step further. And she paid for her actions. 5 stars. Bob
Whoa! The Very best BTB stories I have ever read! 10 stars to the Writer! Not only was his wife totally tattooed head to toe, and her wedding dress and wedding album burned in the fire pit, but her home was sold and totally destroyed by bulldozers so she came home to an empty lot! LOL total Burn! She went to Paris with another man that she was banging and screwed up what they were officially supposed to do. They both got fired and she lost everything. Too bad this stuff doesn't happen more often in real life! Great Story, Great Writing, Great Burn and sounds like all the bases were covered by the writer. Total Destruction! Wow, Fantastic writing. I loved the happy ending. Thank You for the Great Effort. Great Job. Thanks #Buster2U
This was a GREAT story, in the realm of " BTB" !
Having been a Boy Scout myself, the one phrase from Scouting that best describes what Nick most took to heart in his life was the motto "BE Prepared".
And he was.
5 stars.
Enjoyable fantasy. Would have looked more on the Paris trip and the freak out there as well as there post butn pain. But fun story
Now that's revenge lol, don't know if I could ever do that, but I know I'd dream about it! The tattoos were a nice touch, haven't read that anywhere else lol
Really good. A real BTB. They know they have been punished and the punishment will keep on giving. Awesome.
I loved it. Gave it 5 stars. Great BTB. It's good having friends in low places.
Great story where the husband took no prisoners, so to speak. However, I thought that not only tattoes from head to toe, but physical confrontation with her by his friends was a bit on the much side. 5 stars Bob
Had this one in my favorites list for a year or so now....I just keep coming back to it because it is probably the tightest, fast paced, well written BTB I have read on this site. I find though that this one is best enjoyed when I am sitting in my favorite chair in my man cave before a roaring fire on a cold blowing winter night when the thunderstorm is booming outside,,,, After all "It was a dark and stormy night..." (Chuckle,,)
5 stars of course and a big thank you...!!
There are a number of comments that say hurting the slut is bad, but hurting the other man is ok. This attitude is absurd! Do women not have agency?!? Should they not be held accountable for their choices?!? The wife is the traitor-the other man is just the enabler. Whatever punishment the other man receives, the cheating wife should get four fold! Short of death or maiming, full body tattoos are actually a pretty good punishment. It will take a lot of time and money to remove them. Modern tattoo removal, via laser, is basically burning off layers of skin. She will have full body scars, and lose of sensation!
ZK
2nd reading for me and this is so good. just would have gone for magic marker or regular ink verses tattoos.
I loved it! She deserved everything she got for betraying her vows, violating their marital bed, trust, etc.! Hard to feel sorry for someone who destroys the person they claim to love. She would have taken everything from him in the divorce if she had the chance. I just don't feel that it's right to reward her behavior by allowing the courts to do so. She could have divorced him if she wanted another but instead she decided that she could have her cake and eat it too!
Alittle to long with all the BS, But Finally a no BS Story and burn the bitch
Go for the extreme burn, tattoos! Pain getting them, shame having them, pain and expense removing them.
Pretty well written. I believe Nick was a bit over the top. I like how he profited big time but I was a scout when younger and being that vindictive was too much.