by DeathAndTaxes
A conversation I've had with my partner many, many times, and good Lord did you pull it off well. I love the little touches of inexperience.
I'd definitely read more of this. Consider my interest extremely piqued.
Great imagination. And so clean there's hardly anything for an editor to do. I gave it a 5 (but you'd better continue the story—grin).
Oh my. That was, well, apparently more than what I coumd hope for when I went looking for rare malesub stories. The dom is not a sadist, tbe sub isn't a minless slut, it doesn't feel generic, predictable, or too unrealist… that's almost too good to be true. I wouldn't have hoped to get to read something like this. something both creatice, sweet, quite hot, relatable and romantic all at once! Well written straight femdom without humiliation or pain is so damn rare... I'm glad you wrote this. Take care!
Wow, that was amazing!
Very sexy, and all the funny didn't distract one bit!
I really loved Charlie, though. That kind of assertive, sensual woman is so hot!
So right, on so many levels. You really are a master of this craft. *5 + awe.
I actually stopped breathing and just jumped into the scene,no idea what part I played yet,but fuck me,my pussy is still humming. I cant wait for the next installment. Keep on keeping on mate.
I know it's been awhile but this is one of my favorites! Would love to see a part 2
Lots of imagination, This should be continued. The 0ptions are limitless. One of the best stories ever.