All Comments on 'Dance on Your Knees Pt. 02'
by JimBob44
- 10 Comments
Great story, still rooted in the JB44 universe but with some interesting new characters and situations. Very entertaining, thanks for writing!
How do you keep track of all your characters? I know my brain is like a sieve lately but tracking all of them seems daunting. Really enjoyed it 5*
Absolutely loved it! Hot sex along with a great story. Five stars. Thanks for sharing your work with us. Happy 4th oh July!
I hope this isn’t a “I’m taking a long break” story. It definitely had a “Yawning Abyss” vibe to it.
I did like the story however in the beginning it seemed you were all over the place and with Tony coming across as a I know what I want and what I don’t kinda guy just didn’t fit into the narrative. He had strong convictions towards his father and beliefs about race and gender. But as I continued things turned around and came together very nicely and read well. Thank you for sharing your creativity.