by gapster7
The story is very well written. The author knows how to create a situation which is sure to make the reader "hot and ready".
I don't think erotic writing gets any better than this. I was SO disappointed when I found you had only two stories on the site. Its sensual as well as sexual and I can beieve very much that you have been there and done that.
Fantastic
This story, along with being extremely erotic, is so well written. Very much of a fantasy, but that is what this site is all about. As a man, this story makes me feel neglected, because I have no Dani.
This is the most erotic, sensual and amazingly hot stories I've read! Your writing is exquisite and you pulled me into your story from the beginning. I got so hot and horny from reading it, that I had to finger my extremely wet pussy and came twice!!! My god, please write more!!!!!!
I have read and must say I like your style
I was hoping to find her doing her thing until she came and was finally full and happy before you resumed with her on the bottom for round two but good read anyway. Cheers