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Click hereAli pulled me to the bed, rolled over me to the other side then swiftly pushed shorts off her legs to bow her rear to me.
"C'mon, off your shorts and snuggle." I was hesitant at first, but what was the need. My shorts were already below my sack and cock was aimed at the ceiling like a flag pole and she has already taken good looks of it. Just then, thinking about how I came on her many years ago, my cock instantly pulsed leaking pre-cum. Now Ali was waiting, her ass was turned me and her knees were bent and up.
When I removed my shorts and my cock popped free, she snatched it up and guided it between her smooth thighs, clamping down tightly so I couldn't escape. I could feel her bare butt cheeks pressed against my belly - soft and warm. Then she slithered down till my cock squeezed all the way up in the thigh gap, right against her bush. She was sopping wet, like a steamy geyser that releases a sticky substance.
"Mmmm... Feels so good..." she moaned swaying her butt.
Nervously, and rather rigidly, I set my hips into motion. I kept telling myself, that any slight movement in direction would have my cock easily slip into her well lubed pussy, balls deep. My sister's clutching thighs and clenching buttocks felt fantastic. And soon enough, I stopped thinking and fell into a pattern as it was second nature. My shaft slotted neatly between her slippery lips, sashaying slow, but as it was so natural.
"This is good. I even liked it while you did it to me when was chubby and younger. Ah..." Ali sighed and then moaned.
I gasped at the beauty of her milk-white belly, the smooth contours of her thighs, and the cluster of dark soft thin hair in the center. Her body was so slender, my cock jutted all the way through her thighs and out the other side. It sprouted from her bush like a rocket with a mushroom head.
Each one of my thrusts pressing against her clit was met with backwards push of her hips as she shivered, trembled visibly and moaned loudly. Her warm nectar kept seeping down her thighs, lubricating them even more to add to my pleasure. Now I was fucking her seriously - that was fucking her soft thighs and pussy lips. I was no longer fucking my sister, at least in my aroused state, I was thigh fucking the sexiest girl alive.
"Let me turn, can I?" Ali crooned, turned wrapping her hand around me as our lips met. It was definitely different kissing her this time and we kissed like loves while my cock tried to adjust to the new position swaying and poking her to find her thigh gap.
"Wait..." She seized my cock and placed it right between her pussy lips, settled and pushed.
"Ali..." I held when the head of my cock entered her slick hole. I wasn't sure if I called her in panic or in pleasure of feeling her pussy that was on fire.
"Push in... We need to take care of your boner." She whispered and pressed forward taking in good inch or two of my shaft within her.
"Ali..." was all I was able to say, but I pushed in and out shoving more and more of my length as she rode a wave of orgasms.
My boiling desire in liquid form filled her up soon, while she kissed me, rode me and kept ridding until the last drop was within her.
"I normally don't fuck a guy on my first date, but you are the only exception." She giggled holding me.
"What do you want? Another round or wine first?" I asked breathing heavily.
"Another round is fine with me while you still have my dick inside." I smirked "But you have to promise me that you let me fuck your thighs someday again. That was memorable and unforgettable experience. Never thought soft thighs can be better than a nice tits to fuck."
"Umm...Yes. It is kinky, but good. Even back then pretending to be sleeping, I enjoyed it. Sure, any time, even tonight, tomorrow or whenever you want to bring me here. I am free next weekend too if you have a party or not." Ali giggled. "Besides, you made me finish several times tonight and that was some awesome sex."
"Not fair. I only finished once" I groaned. "Next time I have to finish few times more than you do." I complained while fucking her slowly, enjoying the soppy sound that flowed from her juicy pussy. I knew that I could remain hard for another round and wondered how many orgasms that I can make Ali enjoy.
"Deal. If you finish only once this time, I'll suck you to another" Ali giggled.
"Thank you for the wonderful evening, date!" I said as our lips met.
- COMMENTS
I thought the premise was good but I prefer stories where the girl IS actually innocent. I have noticed a trend in male written erotic literature where you can see the common male fantasy of the "woman" taking charge. In reality this doesn't often happen. Also, some of the descriptive language isn't the best however, it was still an interesting read. As for the comments of people not being professional writers, you'd actually be surprised to know that MANY popular professional writers have dabbed into erotic fiction, however, most do not dabble in illegal activities such as incest, which is illegal in all 50 US states regardless of age (marrying a first cousin isn't). However, because this is fiction, and does not portray nor illuminate violent acts with a minor and no one running the site (and trust me, the FBI Cybercrimes unit looks at sites like these to ensure that laws are followed) it is left alone. As someone that had a family member (female) raped by her brother, I sometimes find it disgusting that so many people are turned on by fantasies such as these. However, most people just use it as that--a fantasy and do not act upon it. And in most cases, if a man wanted to do something bad to his female sister, he COULD because of one simple word: dimorphism. Look that up for the word of the day.
You thanked an editor at the beginning. Choose a new one. Repeating paragraphs are not the sign of a good editor. And I'm not sure if English is your first language, but this story is filled with grammatical and usage errors that could have been avoided. Try harder, get an editor who knows how to read and write English and try again. It was a good concept for a story. But the grammar made it difficult to enjoy. Have a nice day.
Nothing earth shattering, in my groggy state this morning it took me a moment to realize that I had read the same thing twice.
I enjoyed the story. Thanks!
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"You don't have to rush, but remember that we have a long drive." I smirked reminding her without bothering to turn my head. Another 30 minutes later, Ali appeared from my bedroom, where she had been dressing. What an appearance... I bit my lip ogling the gorgeous woman who stood before my eyes.
"You don't have to rush, but remember that we have a long drive." I smirked reminding her without bothering to turn my head. Another 30 minutes later, Ali appeared from my bedroom, where she had been dressing. What an appearance... I bit my lip ogling the gorgeous woman who stood before my eyes.
"Few" and "A Few" have different meanings. Few on its own means hardly any, a vanishingly small number. A few means a more than trivial amount. So please go through the story and make the change at virtually every point you use the word few.
Too short. More More. I loved it. You show me both partners feelings and thinking. Most don’t show anything except dicks and its thinking.
Write a second chapter, please
Very well written. Nat's line about her not being a virgin when they met was absurd on her part, like that made it was ok to cheat.
This a beautiful story even second time around. I would love to read where this goes from here if they both want more.
The story was great, but it needs even better editing. In one place, a paragraph is copied. One comment had a great idea of doing a chapter from Ali's POV. Please continue writing.88C8
Re ad the story again. And enjoyed it even more.
O wish you would continue the series.
They planned on making love more
Some confusing points
1) Is/was Ali a virgin? She spoke like this was a first date. Also, do you could his cumming between her "chubby thighs" as fucking?
2) Ali told Bitch Nat that she and Brandon had been dating on and off for a year. Is this correct.
3) Will Ali and Brandon continue dating?
4) Brandon and Nat had dated almost 2 years. Hadn't Ali and Nat ever met?
Hope Brandon and Ali will continue.
to me it seemed a bit stiff. Try reading it backwards and you might find a better flow
I liked the Idea put forth and bravo for posting
But in the end it is your tale and you tell it your way
... but only because of the grammar. 'Nuff said about that. Good story, and please continue to the next chapter.
This is a site for 'ordinary people' to get their stories into the public domain. You are not prefessional writers, but doing it because you want to. Why people enjoy criticising the spelling, grammar or wrong/missing words I just don't understand. Enjoy the story, or shut up !
Anyway, moving swiftly on - I really enjoyed it, I do hope there will be a chapter 2 soon ?
Well I enjoyed reading the story, it was pretty good. Lots of distractions in it though... There were a LOT of missing words! People have already commented on the grammar issue, surprised nobody mentioned the missing words, hehe.
Hey, do guys still wear v-neck t-shirts? Lol. ...and nobody would say 'I dont do taboo things', hell nobody would use the word taboo when talking about incest in general. Nobody Ive met anyway.
....anyway just nitpicking about distractions! Thanks for the story!
If this is after, I'd hate to see what it looked like before.
I am glad Ali used the situation to help her brother but more so to get him aroused, be playful and then made him push his cock between her legs. Ali already decided what she wanted and was very crafty to get her brother to finally screw her. She wants to suck him off and get screwed again is so hot. In the next chapter, I think Ali should be aggressive and get him to screw her hard, cum on her boobs or anywhere else like she wants; she's playful and just let him give it to her and they can go at it many times to enjoy what they couldn't do when they were younger. She has the hots for him and found a way to get what she always wabted. Thank you !!
it was rough in some spots but the feelings and emotions between the characters were genuine.
I enjoyed the the story, it reminded me of my own experience with my sister many years ago. Given that you say you had the story edited, I would suggest that you find a better editor though.
This pertains to the anonymous person who had the Gall and audacity to criticize a person telling a story it doesn't matter if it's their second or third or fourth language they wrote a story. I think that if you want to write a story that's perfect in every way shape and form then do it otherwise shut up and just enjoy.
And the reason I am Anonymous is for some odd reason my computer won't sign in as who I am.
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Sometimes fake date with relative leads to more. It is a good thing and best revenge.
My date was with 16 yr old daughter, similar to this story. We fucked twice that night and the cum flowed uninterrupted from my cock DEEP up inside of her. Anyone wanting to chat about incest? I am canopus_i94 on Yahoo Messenger. Male or Female welcome.
Yes, so HOT and very arousing. Yes, I had to take care of things too ..... obviously, they have go screw each other hard before the nights done. They both want it; especially his sister and they should do it well. They both know what the real history is and now with his former girlfriend "Nat" - he needs to push her out of his mind and who better to trust than his sister !! make it Hot and Hard for them. The following Saturday, they will need to repeat hopefully, to be sure. Thank you.