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Click here"You okay?" he asked.
Dawn nodded wordlessly, enjoying the sensation of his cock spurting its juice into her. She might not be able to walk properly tomorrow, but it was definitely worth the three mindblowing orgasms she had gotten today.
Eric slowly pulled out of her, cum gushing out of her stretched hole as his dick softened. Dawn watched him go to the bathroom and return with a washcloth.
"So," Eric coughed, a rueful grin on his face "I hope that answers your questions about multiple orgasms," he said.
Dawn wheezed out a laugh and then rolled over to present her ass.
"Well, pussy orgasms, yes," she smiled sweetly at him.
"Now what about anal orgasms?"
- COMMENTS
"'So,' Eric coughed, a rueful grin on his face 'I hope that answers your questions about multiple orgasms,' he said."
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Rueful is used incorrectly. It sticks out like a sore thumb enough that it cannot be ignored and wrecks the ending. Rueful: expressing sorrow or regret. I have serious doubts neighbor man had any sorrow or regret in that moment.
Outstanding! I just love how you get into the details that matter. No I hurry and go to read your other stories.
Hugs and kisses
The ridiculously careless typos put me right off what could have otherwise been a good story. If the author can’t be bothered to proof read it or get someone else to do it, I can’t be bothered to read it. These things do matter. Just because it’s erotic literature doesn’t mean it can be semi-literate.
Wow. One of the best detailed descriptions of consensual sex I've read in a long time. I take this as a challenge--the sex in my stories seems brief and a bit lame by comparison. I will read and learn. :-)
First part of a great series - read the Anal Awakening series to see where Dawn is going with this. I enjoyed it all