All Comments on 'El Paso: MistressLynn Pt. 02'
by _Lynn_
- 13 Comments
to the authors previous story. The plot continuation, continued character development and dialogue are all of the highest caliber. Kudos on another engaging tale Lynn.
Just wanted to say I absolutely loved it.I've read all of your other work but this was your best yet.Hope to see more from you soon.
I have to agree with the other commenters. This was your best story yet. The development from the first story begged for more. This is one you can be proud of.
Highest regards
DG Hear
What a perfect conclusion to a fine story! Lynn, you have outdone yourself. I love the characters and the flow, just extremely well done.
What can I say more then others have already told you before.
A perfect story.
There could be a part 3 in it, but that would not be an El Paso sequel.
Now I must start reading your other stories.
I truly enjoyed this sequel -- was hooked from the very first paragraph -- & hope you will write more. Glad you put the link in your sig, I might've missed it... Loved the Miss Robbins/Marty Robbins connection.
take on the El Paso series. I've read the other authors' work, and I think this is the most 'different'. (Others were mostly centered on the story about Feleena) Different, but lovely all the same. Thanks for sharing your talent!
For shame; you made an old man cry, you silly lil' slip of a girl. The sentiment and emotion you built through the story peaked and splashed over me like a Tsunami! Took me a while 'till I could breathe again, wipe my eyes, and blow my nose. Then I went right to the 5h Star and this comment. You did yourself proud on this start and you continue to do so. A jewel you are, and it makes my chest swell to proudly say I know ya. Keep on keepin' on kiddo! You do fine, aye, might fine. Lynn
Part one and two , the tale in total " just so lovely so cute so hearttaking so beautiful, makes my heart sing
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Excellent story, I just wish there was more. Five stars, and thank you for it.