All Comments on 'Gabriel's Story'

It’s said that our paths are picked before we ever start to walk and so it seams that young Gabriel has just discovered what her path is to be . This story could have been in the mind control category as well . Very well done and to see how well and fully she plunged into the world of BDSM would be a great next installment. More please !

So hope the story continues. You held my attention throughout. Lovely story

I liked the story, week written. But I was hoping she could withstand him. She should have chosen another path. The dedgriaton of her mother was too extreme.