All Comments on 'Geek's Big Break Pt. 12'
by PreacherPorn
- 79 Comments
I thought I was nerd referencing but damn!
I waited for a while for this chapter and wasn’t disappointed! Keep it up
5 stars still loving it even if it’s a bit over the top (not that I am complaining), can’t wait to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing!!!!
I sure hope you are on a roll with this story. It's starting to get really good and I want more chapters. So please, don't let us wait 6 months for the next one. Some authors on here are posting a chapter every week....hint hint.
loving the story and really looking forward to the next part. it inspires me to get my own writting going.
I just love this story in fact I love each story you’ve wrote on literotica so far so please keep these coming asap.
As with everyone, I too am loving this story and can't wait for the next chapter. Also, loved the geeky/nerdy references in this chapter-really living up to that title of 'Geek's' Big Break ;) ! Just one question I have about this chapter, while Mia is being taken at the start the text keeps reading 'Grant' rather than "Gio', is that just a typo or is it something that's going to be addressed later (I'm thinking that she's conflating Gio and her dad or brother, but it's been a while since I read the last couple of chapters so I might be missing something)? Also, as again it's been a while since I read everything over, with the next update can I ask that with the character breakdowns we also get a flow chart of sorts for the family dynamics? It's not super important, just something to add to the refresher to help give it an extra pop.
Sad to say, but until this submission I had forgotten about this series. I am extremely happy you are continuing it and look forward to future chapters.
Great continuation of this story. I can't wait for the next part. This is by far one of my favorite stories on here, keep up the awesome writing.
That Bastard Chadwick. I forgot how much I missed this series. I always look forward to seeing where things go. Keep up the great storytelling.
While another great addition I hope the next will be another 6 to 7 page chapter. Please keep it up and hopefully not 6 months from now....
Can't wait for more. Hopefully sooner then 6 months and hopefully a bigger chapter.
Like a couple of others I had let this series slip my mind. Another excellent chapter with more twists and turns than I thought possible. I also agree that shorter wait times would be nice BUT I also realize the authors here are not paid so do need to find other ways to keep life comfortable....
I love this series, wish a better writing job had been done as there were a lot of mistakes, most glaringly calling Gio-Grant during the initial sequence.
Hey Luvs I’m hard at work on pt 13 I wanted to address the Gio/Grant confusion. I’m working on getting this ready to publish as an erotic romance on a pay sight. That edition has Been re-edited and I changed several names. Both I and the people proofreading thought Grant was an better name for a Scottish born geek than Gio. I tried to change the names back before I uploaded here but for some reason. It didn’t catch the all caps section in the find and replace. I’ll check closer next time. If you want to know when the newer expanded version is available to buy just send me an email. The pay site isn’t affiliated with Literotica so I can’t mention them here. And I promise the next part won’t be six months from now.
Damn it lol. I really want to read more of this. I hope it won't be long before this story continues 🤞😌🤞.
Fuck. Fucking, fuck, fuck, Fuck!! This chapter was so worth the wait, great sex, moved the plot along, building momentum for the next act in the story arc and tension for the confrontation. I just hope I don't have to wait so long between chapters. But, I have the patience of a hummingbird, so there's that.
I have actually lost track of this series after chapter 9, because the of the long delay between chapters, and then it popped up on my radar again, and I am glad that it did. The story is actually getting better, which is surprising, and I am so looking forward to Ch 13. Please keep up the good work.
Are we still going to get this story and all your other stories on here though if you go to a pay sight?
Good story. I can't wait to see what happens in chapter 13. I hope Gio has sex with all of the new women soon and starts to get his women in the family pregnant soon
God that was so fucking hot when Mia was screaming out to be used, loved, filled, and claimed by her master. Such desperate longing to be his slave and wife. It's rare to see such intense need, even in the mind control stories I tend to read these days as well. Kudos on that.
This chapter only served to give me a little appetizer in the series. Damn I need more. I felt like it was only a bit more of the build up and no resolutions. I really hope it's not too much longer for the next chapter. The Trophy Wives series is great too. Desperate for another chapter there.
I'm not a fan of how powerful the Chadwicks seem to be. And he just had the houses set up to be able to explode like that? Seems a bit extreme. Who goes to these lengths for a bit of pussy? He seems obsessed. Christ he has all the wealth and power and cares about one girl and her daughter for his son? He could go get anyone else he wanted without all the damn hassle. No pussy is worth THAT much hassle. OK so it's a bit more than that, but really, it seems like an inefficient use of his time and money.
"Jesus, how do I keep ending up with virgins?" Oh you poor sweet boy, Gio. Of all the problems to have. ;)
My only complaint is that I have to wait for more! I hope this series is your primary focus so we can see this story advance and conclude in the not too distant future. It's really good stuff.
You have me hooked and on the edge of my seat!!! Please keep updating this story, I’m waiting in anticipation!
Love this series Preacher! Can't wait for more chapters to be added! Do you have a rough schedule for release or do you just release as and when you can or want? :) awesome writing!
I thought this was a pretty good chapter. I didn't like the idea that Gio had about wives fucking behind their husband's back and that it was OK provided that they keep their husband's satisfied. I personally hate infidelity and I hope that this doesn't become a big or even a small part of Gio's sex life. He has more than enough single women to sate his needs.
Love this series. I wish it was updated a but more often but hey free stories are free stories. Great work though . Keep up the great writing
Compared to the rest of your writing, this one was disappointing. It’s unorganized, and it doesn’t flow. There’s a lot of extraneous dialogue that’s not related to the crises at hand, and the story itself barely progresses. The lack of editing is very evident. — I dislike being so critical, but the quality of this installment is uncharacteristically poor.
Second read through. Amazing as always! Waiting for the final chapters to this. Know your hard at work but damn the cliff is high and I keep staring over the edge just waiting to jump! Excited about the sequals to come as well!
Love the story line, and a lot of geek culture references. It wasn't lost on me that a computer expert dressed in star trek like uniforms was name Will Wheaton.... that gets you a gold star on your geek card.
I start to read this series 2 data ago , and now I finished in the most curius part. I Hope there will be quick next chapter. Exelent story.
I really loved all your series . Defiantly waiting for more of this one and hoping to onedl day see the trophy wives school ruth
Dynamite story I love it just hurry up and finish writing it. Can’t wait for the rest of it.
Excellent series of stories!
They are so much fun to read!
Please continue as soon as you can!
I just finished reading it, terrific story, well written and great character development. Please continue, looking forward to seeing what happens
Why do so many stories suddenly stop when they are actually desperately in need of long overdue further Chapters?
OK, so there are are certain issues with which 'Spellcheck' could help but even then that wouldn't pick up if the wrong word is used, but the base of the story NEEDS to continue!!
Really looking forward to more chapters. The sex part is excellent, but the overall story is absolutely among! Thank you!
Thank you for the chapters 1 -12 as I have only just come (no pun intended) across your story and have binged read them. Can’t wait for the next instalments to find out how many more females will fall for Gio’s charm and the out come of investigation.
Ive been hoping that you would get back to this series.. I just re-read it and realized I had missed entry 12. I have enjoyed the story line, well twice now. Hope you can find the time..
I hadn't checked in on this story in a while. I was glad to see 2 new entries since I had last checked. I reread enough to refresh my memory then read the last 3 entries. Seeing as how this doesn't end in a sex scene but still ended by having this old my man fully erect. I definitely want to read the next chapter.
Thank you
Hey ! - "Cum" on ....finish the story ...its Great in a fantasy way ..Cheers James
Story is developing very well, hope the next installment will wrap up some of the loose ends.
You have a very interesting way of capturing your audience.
I really am enjoying the story. It’s fun and just at the edge of reality. I have not seen anything that would not be possible but there are so many of the truely unlikely pieces put together that you just have to accept it is fiction and have fun with it. Hope to see the next part soon
amazing story love that a h.s. student is running a multi-million dollar business, and seams to have endless stamina. please keep writing more. one of my favorite stories.
★★★★★★ out of 5 ☆
Another great offering from this awesome story. Can't wait to see where you take it next.
I was looking for something quick and hot to read and ended up reading thru all 12 chapters of this over story over the last few hours. You truly brought the characters and story to life and half way thru I found myself worried for the family, smiling when he made them wives, and horrified when that bastard blew their home up. You truly brought this story to life and this is the first story I have ever commented on
This is an amazing chapter and I can't wait to see the next chapter. I keep refreshing to see if a new chapter is out. I hope to see one soon. Love the writing, nerdisms and the family dynamic. keep it up.
I agree with others… When is the next chapter coming out? I read this last one over again, even though I know I read it. I was hoping I was mistaken…… But the creativeness could not be forgotten! You still have so much to tell so many different Avenues to venture down! Please continue the story! Respectfully