by Cuckcaps
That’s literally just abuse. Like, it’s fine if you want to do a cuckold story, but that’s not how any of it should work. She’s abusing him. Gross story.
How is this a loving wife story. This is a sick piece of crap of a whore and a useless boyfriend who gets what he deserves and should just leave her.
Wow. Lordy, my jaw got tired just reading/skimming the first few pages. I think this should be filed under “over the top cuckhold stuff”
fan appreciation is the only real reason to keep writing these. Then please, please, please quit writing. ,This was horrible just horrible.
To much,They all are going home. And I don’t mean back to their house. I don’t love my mothers that much
Im torn the story was well written and certainly detailed. However the girlfriend took it way too far. I would have dumped her long before the first guy came in her mouth.
Fuck off you pathetic creature. The rosa-blanca.ru are enough. Cuckolding and getting off on Cuckolding is for sick fucked up creatures who used to be men. No need to read the story.
Why is there "Error! Filename not specified." several times in the text?
I want to address something here, the lack of communication between MC & the girlfriend. She asked about his fantasies, and he told her. Then proceeded to act on some bs she read on the internet, without ever talking to him about what he actually saw as part of his fantasy. That sounds like a surefire way to get out of a relationship, as all cuckolds is not 1 size fits all as to the way it's dealt with
For me, the sex with his biggest enemy would have turned love straight to hate, and let's just say that later events would see me pissing on some graves. I would probably think it thru given some time, but that is my immediate plan reading this.
As for the writing, it is not too bad, and there weren't a lot of grammatical errors that I saw, which is much easier to read than some of the stories I have read on here, it just isn't my get down.
Years ago my gf blew my one good friend at a party and I found out afterwards. This was the beginning of my life long cuckold journey. I confronted her in bed one night and she confessed which led to him fucking her as I told her it turned me on.
It was stereotypical terrible! A fantasy beyond tolerance, but It will enrage the majority of readers!
I did read it but not a fan of cuck stories. Why didn't he just dump her instead of putting up with her shit. No way should he have married her and had who knows kids. She is a whore and he is a big dumb ass.
No way they had any kids. Yes way they contracted multiple STIs and could never have sex with others again.
Okay story folder is LW not LG but wives not girlfriends and cuck stories so many written these days I start to wonder how many writers dream of being those cucks and such
Does anyone else feel dirty? This my first 1. I know it’s fictional but enuf.
Do the world a favor, and slit your throat. You jelly back, spineless, husk of a man. I hate these stupid ass stories.
ROFLMFAO...by the numbers idiocy, but thats all you've ever written, regardless of the name you use.
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I gave up after she went to the bathroom and he went to the door and stood there. That was it for me. That's when a man goes in, Beats the guy to a pulp, and throws the slut out of the house. Unless he's one of "those" guys who likes to watch or gets off on listening. If the grammar is not atrocious, I judge a story on the characters. but then again, I'm kinda a BTB guy.
This cuck has no friends and his whore girlfriend is apparently his worst bully.
The scale of stories like this starts with hot wife, then moves through cuckold, before ending up at extreme cuckold like this. I guess there are those who enjoy such extreme fantasy, but I’m not one of them I can’t imagine any scenario where a partner could treat her boyfriend like this.
This reads like an extended version of Bullies gangbang my girlfriend written by this author 2 months ago
This all could've been avoided if the MC just looked in his folder and found the name of the file of his dumb wife!
Loved the story and hope you continue with Jess further humiliating him with her verbal remarks.
Would hope she might even start to feminize him as her beta male bitch as she teases and torments him.
I think this would have been better if after the fact he realised that even though he was aroused he had post nut clarity and hated it and left her. I say this because you never see any storys like that where the character makes a mistake and changes his mind like a normal human.
Good ideas, but more experience is needed to develop them. I think you should have finished the previous one or started another one
Her is where the BF leaves and comes back with about 20 gallons of gasoline and 500 rounds of .45 cal amnunition. Mass murder ensues, followed by touching the house and burning the evidente.
DOL
Fun story. I enjoyed it. A lot of fun ideas.
Would have preferred a more gradual build. The jump from normal relationship to a girlfriend doing public gangbangs and doing verbal humiliation she involves other people in felt a little too abrupt.
Same thing with everyone being so eager to involve the guy somehow. I'm not saying stories need to be realistic, but I found it distracting. When they didn't know he knew and made fun of him behind his back and through innuendo, was the hottest part, I think.
Keep writing please, and don't let the haters get you down.
I not only liked i loved this story.
5 stars .. maybe they will be having a school reunion as a mature couple?
I gave this story 5 stars. The girlfriend took things to the extreme which is what cuckold girlfriends do. I was in a relationship with a woman who had over a dozen "real boyfriends". One of her boyfriends is hung like a horse (10" x 7 1/2"). All three of us spent the week in Mexico. I can say from experience this is an excellent cuckold story!
She started off being loving and affectionate, but she sure didn't stay that way.
Really? How the fuck is this a Loving Wives story? Because you wrote they got married in the last goddamn sentence?
No fucking way. Those fuckers are laid out and I fuck her throat deep and leave her gasping on the floor like the whore she is.
Ok. I read this story but it was the stupidest story I've ever read. Unlimited blow jobs to who knows how many guys. Does this girl had a a clit in her throat? No way if a girl was offering bjs to the whole party would I put my cock in her cum filled mouth.
Belongs in fetish with humiliation and cuckold kink. Nonsensical no matter the category. The motivation for any of the characters seems completely absent other than you wanted a certain type of sex scene in your story.