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Halloween Revisited

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As I stare at the computer monitor through salty tears, I knew this was a story I would someday have to write. You see, David is really me and Steven was my first lover. Yes, this is based on real life, and although the "reincarnation" never happened, wouldn't it be wonderful if we could spent even four hours with our departed families and friends? Thank you for reading this story...it was very cathartic to me.

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Sack (PS- This story is dedicated to rgraham666, one of my favorite literotica writers)

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Honey123Honey123over 18 years ago
Oh Sack!

You really know how to get to a person! {{Hugs}}

~Honey

hugo_samhugo_samover 18 years ago
Haunting!

Emotional tale well told. The reader defintely 'feels' the writer's love and pain.

thanks

Unsung MuseUnsung Museover 18 years ago
What a lovely tribute...

A riveting story and a sweet haunting homage…

I feel really privileged to have read this.

bearleebearleeover 18 years ago
You were wrong sack

Actually, I liked this one better and I gave the other one a 5 already so I guess another is in order-very touching story

dr_mabeusedr_mabeuseover 18 years ago
Lovely story, Sack

Those stories that bleed out of our own experiences are always the hardest to write and also usually the best. The emotion is there behind the words, and if it's genuine, it comes through. It comes through in this one.

Nicely done, and best of luck in the contest.

capricious_chiccapricious_chicover 18 years ago
Lovely

I agree with what many others have said - haunting and touching.

AliyahlovinsexAliyahlovinsexover 18 years ago
very sad

I guess this isn't what I'd usually read, but it was very touching. You did a great job with the storyline..and the song, I'm glad you mentioned that in several places, which made the story even that more haunting. Good luck with the contest.

Kisses,

Ali

neonlyteneonlyteover 18 years ago
Compelling Reading

Possibly your best story Sack, the ones that come from inside are often that way. Hope you are at peace with yourself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Touching & Well-Written Story

Very well done. It reminds me of another Haloween-fantasy I have read by the Tarheel Writer. Like one of the other reviewers said 'pass the tissues'! My sincere compliments.

impressiveimpressiveover 18 years ago
Damnit, sack!

Do you have to make me cry in EVERY contest? ~Imp

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 18 years ago
Admiring

your bravery in exposing something so close to your heart in a beautiful story.

It was a bit confusing at first, maybe just one episode too many at the beginning. But nevertheless, a moving story.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

E.P.M.E.P.M.over 18 years ago
Not my usual choice to read...

...but I can't deny the quality of the work. Extremely well done with the aformentioned twist that really made it ring true. Bravo.

Extreme BohunkExtreme Bohunkover 18 years ago
Touching

Sad and bittersweet.

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinover 18 years ago
Well done

Sack,

I know you don't mind getting something beside "atta boy" comments. So while this story has earned all the praise that's come its way, I'm taking the liberty of passing along two writing thoughts.

IMHO you may have overused "had". As an exercise, you might go through and see how many could be omitted w/o harming the plot while picking up the pace.

Also, and again this is all, IMHO, the opening was a tad slow and confusing. I might be wrong or that may have been intentional. In either case, consider the source and ignore my comments.

Those two quibbles aside, You gave us a first-rate piece of imaginative, compelling writing. Congratulations and good luck in the contest.

Rumple

hugo_samhugo_samover 18 years ago
Touching

Your 'warning', while appropriate, seems irrelevant to the beautiful romance you portray in this story. Very Moving!

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
trick or treat...

seemed to come through here. i dug the veiled concept. you worked that in really nice. overall a great read. the only halloween memory i have is of smashing pumpkins throughout the well to do neighborhood....*LOL*.

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
DAMN, ...

STUPID SCORE KEEPER,

GGrrrrr, I forgot it was

there all ingrossed in the

story and tears..

so here ... have a 100.

AND ***** of these.

sGp

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
TISSUES PLEASE....

if you have one, pass it NOW.

And here I thought you had a

really good imagination,

leading me into this strong thought

of story.... and the BOOM,

the bomb..

reality, brought forth the tears,

that have now been removed to

puddles.

-sGp-

Alex756Alex756over 18 years ago
Emotional and gripping

I couldn't stop reading. Such a short story, yet full of soo much emotion. Bravo for being able to write something so clear and beautiful.

kinky shy girlkinky shy girlover 18 years ago
touching

Tender, romantic, and bittersweet. Very moving. While reading, I had hoped that the lovers could be reuinited.

Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 18 years ago
Lovely

Thank you for sharing this. I was particularly moved by the dreams, falling like leaves. Isn't that how memory returns sometimes? This story made me feel very blessed.

cookiejarcookiejarover 18 years ago
Beautiful ...

Thanks for sharing; your story is a beautiful tribute to a loved one. Good luck!

Cookie :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
a beautiful story

...written straight from the heart. ty

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
It touched

my heart. How sad to lose someone, especially someone so young at the beginning of a relationship that seemed destined for you. It was beautifully written articulated well and almost had me in tears. Good luck with the contest.

Danielle

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
.....

... loss ...

... pain ...

Blessed Be,

Always, Lizzy

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