All Comments on 'Have Faith? Don't Mind If I Do! Ch. 02'
by Inkent
- 42 Comments
Almost a nice save. I'm not sure the marriage will last long term but its your story.
OMG I must really be a romantic at heart Great story and I loved it (jaybee186)
A much shorter part 2 a little confusing in the beginning as to where Faith was. You sorted that out in the end. Thank you a good story to read. 4.5 stars.
Letting Toby off after all the manipulations was wrong. And Monica? was a bitch. She basically offered up her friend. They walk away clean and free.
Still it is your story. Otherwise I liked the ending.
I had to re-read from the ladies’ room discussion, to see that Toby’s name wasn’t used until Monica’s text. Faith never used a man’s name, and the words spoken didn’t indicate that it might be Toby OR Ibrahim. Great job with subterfuge! In the end, Ibrahim spoke directly to the scene after the bike ride, but only used generalities regarding his passionate kiss with Michelle… or shouting her name during sex.
The ending was superb.
The way to the end, however, wasn't so clear.
I gave it a 4*.
This narcissistic slut wife is trouble and the husband is too much a submissive sheep, avoiding any confrontation at all cost, until it's too late. Too much unrealistic the behaviour of the slut wife, changing her mind at the last minute. This married couple is too much unstable, with a femdom slut and a cuck sheep. Anyway, good ending twist that make this tale a good balanced one. 5 stars.
Absolutely LOVE the ending!! Great job of writing. Interesting, sexy, and ends well!!
MMM A little contrived. What if Ibrahim still was unable to get an erection in that last night? They would not have had the physical love making that occurred.
He also never explained about the "lover's kiss" with Michelle that Faith had observed. Ibrahim's explanation as to why he had yelled out Michelle's name when achieving orgasm while making love with Faith was highly suspect.
Faith's chat with a perfect stranger while in the bathroom who had then spent a lot of time exposing her own cheating story (why would she suddenly tell all this to a stranger?) was not really believable but was a great way to deliver advice.
A poor story, made worse by a stupid decision to break it up with only a single Literotica page for part 2. With part 1 being 7 pages, adding one more to complete it would have been insignificant. If you absolutely had to break it into two parts, a 7/1 split is about the worst choice you could make.
Just an excellent story, well told and unlike many others that have this tragic theme, it propelled me to"hope" heights I like to achieve when reading this site. The pain and self-serving L/W tag stories are without literary "chops' (I E cuck and bull types) or about dishonest unions that degrade marriage. Thank you so much for this and many of your stories that elevate your readers to a positive experience. All The Way...
IC the same champions of cheating wives and weak, milk toast husbands love this one. Defies logic to think a man is so lacking self esteem and respect that he thinks nothing of just welcoming the slut back into his life. It seems to be a trend for more and more writers to emasculate husbands and praise wives for being unfaithful. What a miserable life to be chained to someone who is so selfish and incapable of really loving anyone but herself. Nonsense
Didn't read, one page flash stories are just like a synopsis and not worth reading. Due to the comments, I'll pass.
That Toby is a nasty piece of work, I don't mind if he falls in love & offers her a future, but to fuck her break up a marriage is an arshole act
Kind of a cheap gotcha plot twist. But it made no sense. Toby was so subtle, clever, sophisticated, and patient; a master seducer. So why would he lay out his game plan to Monica? Like Toby thought Monica was discrete and he needed her to know every detail of his seduction? Monica's reveal was so contrived that it was silly. And Monica was the Only message she received, nothing from Toby?
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A decent setup and seduction, but the last minute Houdini switch was that awkward and unbelievable. Try again.
Great F’n ending…… I thought after pt 1, with the 50th anniversary. I figured that she was with Ibrahim, but had to re-read a couple of times. Pretty sure Faith could have gotten a lot of money from her company and sacked Toby. But what a better revenge than Faith flaunting her happiness in front of Loser Toby.
A very enjoyable tale, thanks for sharing.
As l said a softie at heart. I do like the harsh stories. But this was quite a nice story l liked it.
Scores 5/5
Let’s see how you handle the harsh stories you foreshadowed in your reply to me.
There was no explanation why he called out Michelle during their love making in Berlin
wth lol weird parting the 2 trying to build suspense i take it lol so weird. lol that anon down there either very mad or didnt read the story. sorry comments seem to be a bit better read for me
I loved this summary of the story and hated how it turned my stomach as it progressed so slowly into the emotional climax. Gave it five stars for development and emotional turmoil.
Thanks
I really like the reconciliation factor , but you don’t really explain the whole Ibrahim / Michelle link very well , nor how intimate they had become . With Faith nearly blowing her marriage with the predator Toby , then finding enlightenment at the last second , made this a heartfelt story with a joyful feel-good ending . I really like how you made the readers , me in particular , assume it was Toby’s room she entered , and I , for one , was relieved to find out it wasn’t. You spin a very good yarn sir . 5 stars and a standing ovation
I love this story. I can understand how a couple losing a child would have a lot to get over and if a scumbag comes along at the weak time in their life, it could be devastating to their relationship. I am so glad the wife came through with the right decision and the couple can get back on track for a loving relationship. 5 stars from Xluckylee.
I have seen the loss of a child drive a couple apart. I have also seen a few couples unite to a stronger bond as they supported each other. She got her gift (the warning from the old lady) from the gods BEFORE she fucked the asshole, but decided to fuck him anyway. The hubby fucked up royally when he called out the wrong name and she had every right to be hurt, but no right to do what she did. Hopefully, the reconciliation will hold but I doubt it.
inkent, sorry about my comment, yes I did misread the story. Thanks suggesting I reread it. Now I’ll just go and scrape the egg off my face.
Regguy69 There's no egg on your face, it was a major misdirection inserted in to try and make it an interesting read. I hope you enjoyed the tale INKENT
The way it was written, the whole time I was reading I was wondering which guy she was in bed with. I have to say that I was very pleased the story ended up as it did, leaving me with a smile on my face. Thanks for sharing your writing gift Inkent.
Well written and a real “ loving wife”. Good to see a couple overcome tradegy and difficulty to come out stronger.