by DrivenLust
Very erotic. Writing was actually decent for a non-English writer. Few errors, but that didn't take away from the throat fuck and ass fuck. I write a few stories on this site myself. Maybe a little more detail next time.
I would like for her to suck his cock. Maybe a 69.
Good job I think it is a solid 5.
of your storytelling. I enjoy when authors let me into a character's thoughts and feelings, and you've done that very well with Tony. It makes any scene richer and makes every sex scene hotter.
I'm glad to see you back after 3 years. I hope you won't stay away too long before your next story.
I really like these kind of stories. It is what I am looking for. I always like the guy to be more hesitant, needing to learn to love it.
Loved the story. You've no need to apologies for your writing skills. Keep creating, please.
I really enjoyed the story!! I'm more into sucking cum from my wife's sweet pussy,but I sometimes like having a nice hard cock cumming in my mouth...