by m_storyman_x
Damn, I was reading the whole serie but because it comes in parts and I am not able read it after each other I really have no idea anymore who Mrs. Green was? Now I probably have to start over or can somebody enlighten me?
I went back to double check. Rose green is Mandy, his ex girlfriend's, mother.
Another example of superb storytelling from the author in the 17th chapter of this excellent series. Wonderful characters and romantic atmosphere come together marvellously. Five stars.
Good story. David should try to get Rose (Mandy's mom) in bed again. I'm sure she loves David's dick more then her husband's dick. If David did get Rose to go to bed with him David should try to knock Rose up. I had a few ideas of who the woman was i thought it was the wiman when got his tux Rose or Jessica's mom mrs Danning. Can't wait to see what will happen in chapter 18
What I still don't get is why David never insisted to Many he would love the child simply because it was a part of her. She said she wouldn't ask him to, but the guy depicted here would have accepted that baby. He should have said that to her at least once, particularly after she confessed her love and admitted the baby daddy didn't love her and was already cheating.
Further and further out there... What started as a really excellent romance has distinctly transformed into a rather vile Loving Wives tale... There simply is no real romance left in this stroker...it's sad because I was really enjoying the quality storytelling up to 15 or so...
2 stars
Exactly the same opinions 66as servant111.
I understand the writer may be tired of this long story.
Exampel : I can't understand how rough is the end of the "relation" with Patty.
Until the last encounters with Patty and the school's principal, it was a good storytelling.
Hopefully the last parts will be rewrited....and developped.
One day.
By Storyman or an authorized follower.
Thanks a lot for the first stories