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Click hereI think he was stifling a loud moan and I could feel him trembling as he came again on my tits. I took him back in my mouth and sucked gently. I loved the taste of his cum and the feeling of Alan eventually getting soft in my mouth.
After a moment, he lifted me back up to face him and told me, "That was fantastic."
Even though my face was covered with his cum, he leaned down to kiss me while I still held his now soft cock in my hand. I thought to myself there is a first time for everything. I had just been fucked by a black guy with a huge cock while my boyfriend was out playing golf.
"Beth, is there any way to hook up again?"
I told him, "This was a one shot only deal. As much as I enjoyed this, I have to get back to my boyfriend and you have to get home." I knew I was teasing when I said, "I apologize if it was not satisfactory."
He laughed said, "Are you kidding? I have never cum that hard in my life. But, you are probably right. Despite what you might be thinking, I actually do not play around on my wife."
I replied truthfully, "Despite what you might be thinking, I don't play around on my boyfriend either. If you don't tell your wife, I will not tell my boyfriend."
After we both had a laugh and I finally let go of his cock, he let me get a shower and dressed. However, he did give me his card and told me to call him if I changed my mind or if I ever was coming back through Hilton Head.
On my way out, he gave me another kiss which I returned, and he gave my ass a good squeeze with both of his hands. I could tell he was already hard again. I would have loved to have him fuck me again. But I had recovered some sense by then and time was running short so I just reached down and stroked his cock a couple of times and told him I had to go. I desperately wanted to pull his cock out again and suck it, but I thought I had better get out now while I had some willpower remaining.
All I told my boyfriend when he asked was they had great spa facilities, and I changed the subject to "How was golf?"
He started telling about various shots, how the other guys did, and complaining about some slow people in front of them that delayed things. I was not really listening though. I told him not worry about it and he should get cleaned up so we could go out to dinner because I was starving. I guess going to the spa has given me a good appetite. We had great sex that night and I will admit that once or twice I imagined my experiences from the spa.
That is my story of the time I had had sex with an older black man. I hope it is not my last for either. I have had many dreams about Alan's massage. I have had nice massages since then, but nothing before or after has compared with my Hilton Head massage. I have not been back, but I still have his card.
- COMMENTS
Very sexy and tantalizing story with excellent build up and suspenseful climax! I should take up being a masseuse! You sound like a great study to practice on!
While I favorited this story and appreciate both the slow buildup and how you detailed it extensively, there are certain things in it that forced me to rate it a 4. That's not a bad score, but even assuming this is a true story, we're talking about things that while they were quite erotic, could have gotten the poor masseuse in trouble.
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I credit you with the willingness to take your time and detail the experience fully; this is rare nowadays, and it's pretty obvious that back in 2005 the writing quality for interracial romance was much higher than today, as literal drivel and sometimes complete and total degradation of the opposite sex character or race reigns here--and as in the case of a recent writer, denigrated women that should have been treated respectfully. It's really sad, so the story stands apart in those ways.
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What concerns me most with the narrative aside from how unprofessional the masseuse was, was that when writing this kind of account, you must open a thesaurus and make sure you alternate wording because the masseuse likely visits some of the same body parts more than once, so I noted a fair deal of repetition and while I certainly agree that this story deserves some recognition, it wasn't as fully polished as it could have been. Drawing Alan as divorced instead of married would have spiced it up more, then have him enter her and she takes the big plunge by letting him come inside her and risk getting pregnant. I believe changing those two little things along with the grammatical approach would have definitely nabbed this story a hands-down 5 (and just have made this a largely-based-on-a-true story).
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Thank you for a very well written contribution to this category which desperately needs it, and I'm glad that it was in the contest winner section so I could more easily find it. Thanks for a smooth read and an entertaining tale.
Was nicely written it moved along slow enough that you could picture the massage and slow teases to each other the sex was great nice and smooth by both , great story
A supremely sensuous and erotic story. I was in heaven all the while I was reading and imagining it was me giving her her massage ...and I was hard the whole time I was reading :)
As a beginner tantric masseuse, your story was delightfully detailed and paced perfectly. The build up of tantric massage is a little longer, but the 'finale' is always explosive. Excellent story!
great story supurb the last chapter was so good makes you want to become a massuse
What a wonderful story! Vivid, erotic, and sensual. I could feel everything Beth felt.
This was an excellent story. The pacing was perfect. Slow but not too slow buildup. I wanted her to keep on going and she did until she was completely satisfied. And so was I at the end. I came very hard. Keep writing!
Just re-read this story and loved it just as much as the first time. You hold our attention really well, and I so enjoyed the long slow buildup, both his respectfulness and his heat, and the same with yours.
So simple, almost matter of fact - the way you went from conservative to pretty out there. Actually I do believe life goes pretty much this way.
A very well written story with a steady build up. I would love to have Alan as my masseuse!
Great story Beth!!
I had read this much earlier and enjoyed it then and really enjoyed it again this morning. You have a great sense of story telling with enough detail and yet not boring me.
joe
A sensuous massage with a happy ending - tables turned...really well written - dug the way the crescendo built up...great job! Hope to see more chapters and/or similar stories from you
Surprised other writers still show you as a favorite writer.
Like every bit of your story. It is a great script for an awesome movie. It is a massage that all women need and one their husband/boyfriends want to watch happen.
I don’t normally make it past the first page on long story, yet you kept the story line interesting that I went thru all three pages.
Keep in mind some men like pubic hair either bushy, landing strip, trimmed into a heart. Keep up the good work.
Travel Girl....this is absolutely one of my all-time favorite stories. It was so hot. I love the way you write you had me captivated. I wanted more!!! Thanks for sharing!!!
Beautifully written and brilliantly paced. One of the most beautiful and thrilling descriptions of a successful seduction I've read in a long time. You even show us the tiny chinks in narrator's armor which will be exploited and lead to her gradual loss of control and final capitulation.
So why, oh why, do you have to throw in the 'I'm really a faithful person' bullshit?
"Despite what you might be thinking, I actually do not play around on my wife:" right after he asks to "hook up" with her again.
"Despite what you might be thinking, I don't play around on my boyfriend either:" then she keeps his card and says she "would have loved to have him fuck me again." She's even thinking of him while in bed with her boyfriend.
The truth is they'll both cheat again, and it will be even easier next time. Why not just go ahead and let them admit it? Why should they try to convince themselves they're faithful, when they both know they aren't, and don't want to be?
Thanks for remembering and sharing your massage experience. A well written exotic story. I can imagine you felt the tingle and rush as you recounted your experience. I hope you have other experiences that you'll share with us.
Lovely story. I need a good massage. xoxoxoxo Annette
Very Nicely written Travel Girl.
I love how you've paced the story and the details work great.
One element which appeals to me is when the lady is aware that she has ' an ounce of sense left '. That combined with the loss of control is a big plus. :-)
Ps : You've used the word ' recovered ' quite a few time to describe Alan covering youe skin. Recover does have a different meaning doesn't it ?
Maybe re-covered ( as in covered again )
I bet it took you a while to recover from that ' massage ' ;-)
I'd love to read more !
It has been some years since I read this story. It is still very enjoyable to read and very well written. It obviously took some time to write. Thank you for sharing such an intimate experience with us.
Best ever, I (we) love the true stories - the real ones that bring us to the edge - I'm send it on to the horny girls I know.
More please.
....you have real life experience receiving massage. I used to work at a high end resort spa in Scottsdale, AZ as a massage therapist while paying my way through art school. In two years there, I gave the sort of massage you describe to a few women. A woman would have to request a male therapist if she wanted one. Usually, it was because she wanted a "firm" massage. I never received the same reciprocation you offered to this gentleman but I did get large tips! Great story!
This is a fantastic story, very erotic. The way you described the massage I imagined I was the one getting massaged and Alan was Alana. I liked your method of fleshing out the characters.
I love the stories written by Travel Girl (aka Beth). I am a guy but were I to have been born a female I sense that I would have acted and conducted myself in exactly the same way as the author ......especially liked the MUNICH story and experience.
Wonderful story...sexy and erotic! I love to be massaged and while I've never had a totally nude (uncovered) massage before, your story reminds me of the fun possibilities of a nude massage...maybe one day!
she is scheduled for another massage and she is attended to by a beautiful mature woman.... mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
If this was my wife I would have been thrilled to see his black hands slide over her body and his cock plunge into her mouth and cunt. You certainly create the mood with your writing.