All Comments on 'His Metamorphosis into a Woman'
by spellofasiren
- 5 Comments
I didn't read much further than the second paragraph due to the excessive use of parantheses. Some use is fine, but when it's showing up more than once in every single paragraph, it creates too many pauses for a story to flow smoothly.
Loved this first part?? I hope there will be more... And I hope that Jennifer and Katie will get more intimate as well...
As i changed in to the woman i am now what is next.I can pass for a women with all i have done to my body.No hair firm butt slim waist breast long blonde hair.Once fully made up all that remains is to dress.Push up bra high waist eight strap garter belt stockings six inch stripper heels all in black.Now the dress i love a red slip silk short dress.I waste no time finding a hard cock to suck on and fill my ass with cum.But one is never enough for a cock slut like me.