All Comments on 'Into the Light of Dark'

And may those who glorify rape by pretending that women enjoy it join them

If you read my other work, you'll know this is a departure for me. I wrote this story at the request of and in collaboration with a female acquaintance...it is in fact her (at least physically) in the story. If you look at the nonconsent section, it's mainly made up of stories written by women. Makes me wonder if only men who write this sort of story get shelled.

again i ask... why do you ppl read writings placed in the reluctance/non-consensual section and get offended and leave silly comments?

i see i will put a disclaimer on all my stories ...

'idiots who do not like the content but still insist upon reading it... go jump off a cliff, or read mary poppins...you comments will not be accepted'

This was a fair story. I myself dont believe that forced/reluctance/nonconsent require the use of force, violence, not threats of deadly force. Rape is a crime and even if the victim gets off on it, it is still a crimal act and punishable by law. Dear Kitty if you cant take criticism please dont write, it will make you life happier, and remove you frustration. Yes the Stockholm Syndrome is real and people do learn to love their captors but this girl was held only part of one night and it changed her life all around? How strong was her personality and her will? Was she already a BDSM submissive or a wannabe? I have never had to physically abuse a woman to enjoy her and anyone that does has a mental problem of their own! There are lots of subs out there and people who really are into such things know what safe, sane, and consensual mean. And yeah you man not agree with it but if those of us that do know you are violating it any one of us will call the law and be a witness.

Obvious talent but humiliation, pissing and pain!!! This wasn't erotic or arousing just a crude sick act because you could. Why is that - you should wonder.

This story says yes.Events in my own life say, yes. I don't much like the thought that someone I like or love could be changed like in this story... but I must admit, it is possible. Written well enough to feel real. The author is skillful and gets the rating for the skill, not because I liked it.

First very well written. Next great plot. Hope they get her again.

The first thing that pisses me off was the author had to enter some half assed apology for his writing. Own it. You wrote it so let the story stand or fall on its own merits. We dont need your commentary about this and that trying to defend your writing. Dont have the balls to write what others may find uncomfortable, go back to See Spot Run.

As for the same people making the same negative comments, it is fairly plain that one or two people read this catagory and make comments. It is their agenda. Fuck em. They are the reason abortion should remain in effect.