- Loving Wives
- Irene
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by Kippy189
- 27 Comments
Predictable story but it was ruined by awful grammar stating with the opening words.
... There's a LIT reader named Oscar who has asked numerous writers to come up with cuckold stories starring him and his wife, Irene. And some of them obliged.
Sadly for us, that (closet?) cuck didn't requested that those authors post his fantasies where they belong: in Fetish.
Still, 'gotta give him some credit for his power of persuasion, making so many people waste their time solely for his benefit... that's all the credit I'll give him, though.
Don’t waste your time, you are talent free.
This just started out as a cheating, slut, entitled Wife getting her "oats". Then the pathetic, spineless, weak Cuck of a husband simply rolls over like a Lab dog and allows everything to take place without objection. Nothing sexy or erotic about it. Give them a few years and the Stud will be fucking the girls also and then the slut wife will think "Mmmm Perhaps I shouldn't have done it!". Of course, the pathetic cuck will be wanking himself as the Dom takes his whole family and pimps out the daughters while letting his Uncle fuck the slut wife. Yeah, really erotic stuff.
I enjoyed the story, although I felt it was a bit long. Still, five stars from me. You know, the same Catalan Oscar one asked me to write a cuckold story for him, and I did, too. It's called Irene Struggles to Please Her Hubby. Oscar has quite an imagination! Nicely done, Kippy189! ~~ JB Edwards
Find a different subject. This story with changed names has been beat to death. Oscar is an ass and it's all your fault.
why have you wasted your time and talent on writing such poor awful story like this . These stories are a complete waste of time writing. Because there are to many writers that are writing exactly the same stories as you are at the moment. These stories might as well say they are dead stories these are stories are stories that can seriously damage a talented writers reputation. These stories are being written by newbies trying to make a mark on this site. The story lacks imagination and creativity it basically lacks scope. You should have stayed writing nonConsent stories you were becoming a talented writer there. You have a great talent but doing something like this at a time when the loving wife category is swamped with this type of story makes you look like a complete fool. You are clearly better than this yet your actions clearly shows you what a fool you have become. You should know that only BTB stories are making it in the loving wife category. So why write a cuckold story which gets you nowhere and makes you look like a complete fool why do it .
Just a nasty, disgusting story about people that are dumber than rocks.
1 star
She is unprotected, so she should have a bump starting. Hubby will love caressing the bump as he cleans her pussy.
Why bother, not a redeeming feature whatsoever in this story
A much better ending would be for Irene to announce to her husband that she is not only taking the new job but she and her daughters are moving and leaving Oscar for good. She should divorce that wimp and settle in with Carlos and the great sex they've had.
Same old cuck shit! First paragraph gives away the whole damn story! Man and wife 12 anniversary at restaurant, husband says "who's the guy". Wife says he just a guy at work. Next thing you know she's fucking him and poor hubby is eating his cum from wifeys pussy! Give me a fucking break! Same old tired ass shit Kippy
These types of stories are popular and not, I thought the story went on too long and the finish was quite rediculous. I doubt any married man with children could collapse in this way. Frankly, I would have preferred her boss to get involved leaving hubby to his own insecurity and without the humiliation of opening up to his family.
What I did enjoy was the detail of the liaison build-up to eventual submission and the wife's determination to not break up her marriage. I also have to admit I gave it 5*
As another poster said, you badly need an editor or proofreader. Good story, but all the mistakes were distracting.
love really ,she treat's him like dog shit, she nothing but a nasty whore ,who has a speical place in hell ,and your story not finish .
There were enough negatives to bring it off the 4-5 range down to 3. It started out intriguing but the finish fell flat. Had so much more potential
I wish I was Oscar and Irene my wife.
Getting regular cream pie feed from her.
Actually my wife did for me when her colleague fucked her in office. She came home all drenched and I as a good hubby cleaned her.
The taste was different and yummy.
Laugh my ass off.
I read this drivel on a latrine wall, farted in cum, near the trailer Skippy‘s mom lives. LOL
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Been beaten to death already but desperately needs editing. As for the story I can almost point to the exact line where you clearly lost interest and just wanted to finish the project. It was going good up until Oscar "discovered" his wife's infidelity, then the whole pace shifted from a steady smolder to a ham-handed, breakneck blunder to the finish. Seriously you could've easily drawn it out another four or five chapters. Played on Oscar's voyeurism and Irene's waning guilt as she goes back to her lover despite trying (unsuccessfully) to break it off. Hell you had a whole plot line you could've explored when Carlos left abruptly; the uncertainty as Irene returned to her husband, trying to hide her misstep as Oscar discovers the recording. Thinking she'd made a mistake both in accepting Carlos and abruptly breaking it off, only for him to return halfway through the week and use the job offer to resume the chase. All the while Oscar continues to check for recordings, goes through her laundry, and continues dropping not so subtle hints that he knows what's actually going on and offhand suggestions that she continue the game. I know, it's easy to critique when you're not the one doing the writing, but there are so many missed opportunities here. I get it, this one ran long. But I hope you do (or did) a rewrite on the ending. I think we both know after all that work you did on the build up this story deserves much better.
Ich finde die Geschichte hat die letzten, mehr oder weniger, negativen Wertungen nicht verdient.
Natürlich könnte man die Entwicklungen ausbauen und verlängern, ebenso eine Fortsetzung der Geschichte fordern, oder, oder, oder...
...aber selber eine eigene Geschichte schreiben, die vielleicht besser wäre!?!
Ich meine, alle anderen, die diese Art von Lifestyle lieben oder geil finden, kommen doch auf ihre Kosten, oder?
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