by kamalw1
I am attracted to stories where a woman needs help because her husband/partner can not impregnate her (eg. due to low sperm count, or, partner is lesbian). So was hopeful as I started this one.
Was immediately turned off by her addressing him as King, and later by him calling her bitch. Did not like him lording it over her and demeaning her.
Want a story where each treats the other with respect and affection and as equals.
Also, lacked explanation as to why she solicited his services. Or why she would want a baby of mixed race.
I like needful insemination stories.
But not at all this one.
2 stars.
Please remove this story (note that it is the third lowest rated of kamalw1's stories) and replace it with one where the participants honor and care for one another, including any impotent husband who may be involved. Selfishness and self aggrandizement is not attractive.
Paul in Oklahoma
Did Jessica have a Boy or a Girl, twins??? Did Jacob give her more kids????