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Glad to see Phil back
I'm glad Phil and Rick are back together, they need each other. This story was not only captivating, but a good life lesson about how nothing comes free or easy. Thank you.
Awww!
I'm glad that Rick has finally found what he needs, but I am sorry to see him go.
Bravo!
Nice twist. I thought the lawyer would be a problem but he turned out to be the solution. The interesting thing is that even without Bill's money Rick realizes his happiness in Phil and Phil's greater maturity will benefit Rick much more than the windfall. I loved Phil's speech- humble and accurate, a lesson for us all about misguided ambition. This story neatly illustrates Stephen Fry's assertion that goals can be dangerous. Another great novel, Sir71plt.
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