All Comments on 'July: Seduced to Cheat'
by casanova-ben
- 12 Comments
YOur stories are somewhat sad in that you take satisfaction in possibly destroying a marriage, and in any event, destroying a trust between your victim and her husband.
Maybe the tables should be turned, and his wife/girlfriend should cheat on the seducer.
This story needs a continuation into a more meaningful and sordid affair, regardless of spouses involved.
I actually like the set up and plot of the story, you're not afraid of writing the main character as a selfish prick, he's a bit of a villian, which is interesting. Unfortunately, the dialogue is pretty weak, especially during sex. Is she supposed to be an immigrant and I missed that part? Because what she says sounds like something I would expect from a comic using a bad Russian accent.
But the story does have a lot of promise.
Not a sympathic reader in sight as your words bore home - holding her job and marriage in limbo - where is the real story - what is his risk or consequence if any?
Great story. I've been there... everything but the act which would have made it adultery. I'm single. We loved being together, just in each other's company. We got each other off... orally, manually, anally. But we stayed away from adultery. Her husband was married to his career and his money. She stayed for her children. Three years after we met her husband died of a massive heart attack. We waited a decent interval after the funeral, two or three whole hours, before comsumating our love. We married six months later. We never regretted not having broken the commandment against adultery.
Lots of spelling errors. A very simple story. Not enjoyable to read at all.
What a great story! Definitely one of my favorites ..... But it deserves a part 2!
Also I can not believe this is your ONLY on this site ?
No longer a faithful loving wife, she was.now the faithless whore of another man.
Great seduction! I love it when a married woman opens her legs for another married man!
I don't want to loose this job???? You don't want to LOSE this job. Loose is likew the way Aholes wear their pants!!