All Comments on 'Laresa's World Ch. 24: Jonathon'
by Darkniciad
- 13 Comments
Well done! I have wondered how Aaron would meet his end. I would have liked something more public... like seeing him succumb upon an Incan temple in front of an assemblage of his "worshippers." Well executed and neatly woven. Excellent read!
Too long....hell no! I want more! This was one of the best, and they are all good. But boy are you all setting to bar higher and higher with each submission. Looking forward to the next (and good job with the demise of scumbag).
Laresa free at last, and all thanks to a medieval orphan....well done!
It's a great buildup! And has been a great chain to work on! Thank you for all of the work and conversations in creating the Society!
With a story like this! It's a great chapter.
I think you all did a wonderful job in incorporating the Society into the tale like this.
And boy, am I glad that slime Aaron finally got what he deserved.
Well done.
Thank Gaia that Aaron finally got his! The fact that I loathed that character shows how well the characters are drawn. All in all a great story!
I could not stop reading Laresa's World! I spent almost the whole day reading the chain. Great story!
Excellent use of scene shifting, Aaron always was a prick, so no love lost. And a nice release on the chapter to leave a sequel open.
I Would wish for a hundred more chapter but I`m not in possition of Laresa ring but please please keep writing
thanks for the amazing stories
A nice long story.
I like how you you closed one plot line nicely, even as you added new twists.
Loved it, although you do seem to have created something of a challenge for the next author. 😂
Let's hope that they're up to the task.