All Comments on 'Leigh Trains For A Triathlon Pt. 02'
by JohnRocker272
- 14 Comments
Very well written! I liked the expanded direction, but I guess I would've been happy with only the original characters aswell. I'm looking forward to the finale, just hoping they don't break up and Leigh doesn't end up with the dutch guy
Are you going to give the original author the credit for the story you stole?
It always makes me want to vomit when weak, pathetic guys allow their GF's to walk all over them. Mind you, he was a complete arsehole masturbating with Steph, showing his cock and watching her masturbate. That just makes him a hypercrite as well as a wimp.
Having been a top competitive athlete myself, it was just ridiculous that they were all drunk two nights before their Full Ironman race. Do you really know how much that takes out of the body? They'd be lucky enough to be able to walk rather than getting drunk and partying hard, fucking around.
Finally, her actions getting naked and prancing around are not fitting actions for a GF. He needs to grow some balls and break off with her NOW. She is just going to get worse: a lot worse.
Hey! Don't feel bad. It can't ever be long enough. This story is amazing and I love how you write this cheating girlfriends. Don't mind the hate of low self-steem dudes who only want to self insert into alphas to fap a quickie. You are AMAZING and Ill be reading all of your stories.
I adore Leigh and I hope you don't rush it out of fear of it being too long.
I just can't find this titillating at all. It's like watching a slow-motion car crash.
The relationship is so unhealthy that I can only notice that fact and it keeps pulling me out. Leigh needs to be less of an airhead - she reads like a naive 18yo - and the MC needs to figure out what he wants.
I only feel frustration while reading this - maybe that's what you're going for? If so, you certainly hit your mark.
shes fucking a bunch of guys and its getting beyond ridiculous .
boyfriend is an idiot to not kick the slut out .
one star .
Ignore all the people complaining about the story, they clearly enjoyed it otherwise they wouldn't have read it. Just trying to act all 'masculine' when in reality they are probably 'incels'.
I really enjoyed it mate. Keep up the good work!
This story has been great so far, can't wait to see what you have planed for Leigh. Your narrative style is my favourite in this cheating/exhibitionism niche, cheers.
One of my favorite series on the site. Any timeline on the next chapter?
Once again, I am in complete agreement with hugplx's critique ... this tale is like a train wreck that I can't seem to turn away from. When Leigh cried and asked if our hero was going to break up with her, his answer should have been, "OH HELL YEAH. GOOD-BYE." Well, in for a penny, in for a pound. If you give our hero some balls in the next chapter, I will give your tale 5 stars!