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All Comments on 'Listening In'
by phonybeatlemania
- 38 Comments
Another great Val-story! I enjoy these shorter, self-contained tales, and I very much hope you continue writing them!
I'm not big on domination stories but this was perfection. The only thing missing was some tribbing.
I’m laying on my bed breathless and sweating. This one messed me up, in the best way possible
Another great stand alone story. But could this one lead to a follow up🤔
Your writing, both of these are fantastic! I love them and you!
Honestly one of the hottest stories I've ever read. I had to take a few breaks and fan myself off before continuing on! Definitely worked me up! Beautifully written, please don't stop writing!!!!
Wow! Like others I loved the story, your writing, your descriptions and more! Whew. Can't wait until the next story or maybe I should so i don't die of heart failure.
Wow! This is definitely a story worth reading. I am more than excited and turned on. I feel like I was actually there. You are a great writer. I would love to read more from you. X
Val from your other stories? Beautiful connection.
Very good story, loveable characters. If done with humour and nicely, I even can appreciate a little bit of dom/sub behaviour.
Loved this story. Didn't make the Val connection til I read someone's comment on it. Both your stories are great! Please keep writing them.
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Gosh, wow. I hadn't expected for Val to burst in like that, but I'm so glad she did. The story went from good to incredible in my eyes there. Very good work.
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kinda think everyone should have a Val in their world, right? loved the story.
I'm speechless. The energy play, the descriptions. This is what erotic lit should be.
amazing story, so so so sooooo hot!
sidenote: it made me utterly confused... would my dom girlfriend enjoy to be dominated? should i try to do this?
i know this is only a story, but maybe there's something to it?..
So beautiful, oh so perfect... Finally someone who can put into words the way it is at times. Loved it all. Maybe someone should have had their bum broken in too... or maybe that is just a lovely perversion this Uk girl enjoys.
Great story as was your 'sleepover'.
You should definitely write more. Both your stories are incredibly sexy, and you do an amazing job writing them.
Amazing story, it definitely toyed with my head and left me with a lot to think about.
I'm glad that Tom figured out his mistake and that Clara realized that he was worthless. Tom will spend his life pondering his mistake and thinking -
woulda... coulda... shoulda... 😖
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This and your other story - best lesbian porn I've ever read. No competition. Absolutely fantastic.
First of all you are a marvelous writer. But it struck me that both of your stories featuVal. Obviously someone important to you. Id plove to hear the truth about her. Like I said you’re terrific. Too bad you stopped
Very hot, such a shame you've stopped at 2 stories. Who knows how many girls you'd be fucking by, say, the 10th story?
Sounds like you'd have some tales to tell about your relationship with Tori, look forward to reading them xx
What a romp! You put a lot of effort into planning and executing this erotic gem. Thanks.
I can appreciate how much it takes out of an author to create such an intense narrative, and how much skill you pour into the craftsmanship. We'd be honored to enjoy more works in the future.
5 stars, and that's by rounding down!
What a great story, it was great to hear the cock tease Keira got some of her own medicine. Maybe there is a story with Tori in the future? You are good at stories. Thank you!
This is just brilliant...don't even know what to say about it. I love the complexity of the story, and achieved without sacrificing even a bit of erotic heat. Beautiful.
Amazing. I’m usually not into dom/sub stories, but this was so hot and well done, I was sucked in.