All Comments on 'Loneliest Man Who Ever Lived Ch. 20'

Cliffhanger! And I was hoping to see a catfight.

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Aaarrrgh! A cliffhanger ending. Well done - tension up to eleven.

I smell a rat, though. Is it "Claire" or "Goldie"?

Someone kidnapped Goldie and set car on fire. This may break Harry for awhile.

Incredible suspense, small catfight, all kinds of drama and doubt...now Goldie appears dead and we get a cliffhanger? You upped the ante on this one and well done!

I have my suspicions though that the Foundation indeed programmed Claire, because there were at least 4-5 times where her face was impassive or something of the sort, which usually proves programming. I'm also inclined to agree with WWB that someone kidnapped Goldie and did something to the car. 5

I love introducing the conspiracy theory plot line. Is it one of them or both or neither? 5*

Helluva cliffhanger. Still fun to read. 5stars

Now that's how proper cliffhangers are done! Bravo! 5 stars