by LT56linebacker
I've toured that battlefield. My forefathers fought there. Can you just imagine the looks of people of that era seeing Sketcher shoes?
There were plenty of firearms in the XVIIIth Century.
No _repeating_ firearms, but the small size of a 9mm pistol wouldn't be surprising. Look up "muff pistol."
chien-cochon Anglaise
Nice ending! I didn't like the original - despite the decent ending it was too cucky with him accepting the cheating skank back immediately. But this one has enough karma delivered on the cheater, to offset the original's bad ideas. Would have been 10 stars if MC shot off the lover's dick, but can't have everything, so just 5 stars.
Sequence problem; MC in original waited days if not weeks before burrying stone. Also didn't bust it to pieces.
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This "continuation" added nothing we didn't know or couldn't readily workout.