All Comments on 'Milked by My Fiancée’s Mother Ch. 01'
by subleroy
- 20 Comments
Interesting premise.
But the milking is too mechanical. Too quick to start. Too quick to end. Too repetitious.
Perhaps some dialog during the milking sessions would help. What was he thinking about? How far had he gone with her daughter? What did he like about her body? Would he like it id her daughter was milking him?
She said she would fuck his ass someday. Why not at least a little fingering to give him an idea about what was in store for him?
Three stars.
This story has promise! It needs editing though. An app like Grammarly will solve most of the petty errors. The premise itself is a dream for those of us who like the idea of being under a strong woman's control. A whole family of women who dominate, display and share their men would be a dream come true for me. Another chapter awaits so I must go! Hopefully this will provide a wealth of "dreaming" material.
Very good premise! The idea of being at the mercy of every one of my wife’s female relatives is exhilarating. Get Grammarly or find someone to edit, the mistakes throw the reader off a little. Great first part though!
He has been with this girl for two years and now she wants him to change his entire lifestyle for her? To no longer have regular sexy (assuming they have made love, they have been together years no?) and to give up all notion of any sort of self agency and control.. Seems kinda far fetched. I doubt this girl loves him as she claims.
This is a fantasy not real life. Stupid comment.
You really should re-read your stories before posting as some of your words made me laugh instead of making me horny.
Utterly amazing! Perhaps an editor would have suggested "udder!" And his penis would have been more like a "teat." Relationship is doomed from the start.
Has potential. My first wet dream involved a milking machine! As outrageous as this is it is still fun. Besides the obvious need of editing there is, in my opinion, one glaring inconsistency. Edith wants her daughters candidate for marriage and entry into the family's lifestyle to be absolutely naked from the neck down (i.e. no hair). But, and in my mind it is a big but, she allows him to mount the milking station without even taking a shower! She could bathe him herself; maybe even give him an enema to prepare him for prostrate stimulation. She even sucks his more than likely sweaty balls. Other than that not a bad start!
Not worth reading chapter 2.
Deceitful girlfriend cannot be trusted.
CFNM is fine. Abuse is not
"maybe" when he propose means: give her a good kick in the ass and find a better woman!
Like 99% of English words, you just add "s" to the end of "milking" to make it into a plural; hence "milkings", not "milking's". I don't care what your spell-checker says!
love this story, love the concept
where have you been when i was younger
This is awesome, too bad i cant give it more than 5 stars
It's not just a matter of typos, of course - you often seem to choose the wrong word (e.g. "monarch" when the context seems to imply "matriarch").