All Comments on 'Mother of Love Ch. 02'
by ChloeKendall
- 29 Comments
Excellent writing, and strong build up. Please write more chapters, the story is captivating.
What a very descriptive story with just the right speed. It will be nice to see if he fucks his Aunt, of which I'm sure he will in a threesome with his Mom.
Good story. I like the characters and the pace of the story. It is good to see the love between mother and son become reality. Keep writing and I will keep reading. Thanks for your time and imagination.
Since's hes about to bang his aunt, might throw his sister ( And possibly taking her virginity, if she still is.) into the mix aswell! Nothing better than a ending with a foursome with Mom, Sis and Aunty.
Your story reads at a good pace and you charictors are becoming better developed. I like the fact that mom is getting to explore her fetishes and I hope she continues to do so. Can't wait for part three to see if aunty can keep up.
Bravo! A wonderfully written chapter! I must say, that you really did great with this part! Well written and thoroughly in-depth! I love it! Thank you for sharing this with us!
Wish I had taken my mom when I was younger & she was in the prime of her life
Great Mother/Son story ! I really hope you continue this, and that you will be doing more writing.
Much like the other posters, I'm eagerly awaiting chapter 3. I've got you favorited, & are looking forward to any & all further stories.
Loved all of it, was disappointed in the finish, could have gone a lot further, as a Mum she was a dream for every son
Awesome way for part 2 to go! I can't wait to see the Aunt come into the action!!!!
Keep it going!!!
I want to see the episode with her sister and son, and all others you make up.
Your descriptive story telling is one of the best I have ever read from a mother's perspective. Truly one of the most erotic stories I have read here in a very long time.
One comment though, incest is hot but pregnancy between a mother/son or brother/sister is not in my perspective so when you think about chapter 3 please do not make her pregnant.
Pretty excited for all the other characters you've mentioned. Look forward to reading more. The story is yours to do with as you please, but if I had my wish, it would include a lot of sneaking and "risky" activities going forward. Love it when the risk of being caught by dad is not enough to stop the need for each other.
Either way, I'll be here for whatever your mind dreams up.
Wow. Standing ovation here. I never thought that I would ever see another author on here that could compete with klrxo and her very descriptive mother/son stories, but here you are doing just that. Are you sure you are not klrxo under a different pen name? Because this felt almost exactly like her style - and that is the biggest compliment, believe me. Klrxo is the queen of literotica, and I do believe, with this, she has finally found someone to pass the reigns to.
Holy mother of god was this good. Please continue with this, and please ignore the people who are against the pregnancy thing - they don't know what they are talking about. This was a masterpiece. Bravo.
And go to my profile in xhamster, you will see my mom. Hope you like pee drinking👍
Thanks for the story, but he didn't suck or slurped her pussy like me.
This is one of the best pieces of writing on this site. Nothing is forced, there is humor, reflection, reality, and characters stay in character. You dont know how annoying it is to have characters completely go off the rails in stories. You did a marvelous job keep it up im a fan of your writing.
BUT!!! it's esophagus not trachea! The trachea goes to the lungs not the stomach.
Didn't expect that! Looks like sonny boy is gay, but in the closet for now.
Underrated! this is much better than the usual wham-bam-thankyou-maam stories with high ratings. I swear they cheated the ratings
Rhetorical question, I suppose, since I never go back to see if an author responds to my comments, but why wasn't she allowing Donald to come in her the last 10 years? (Maybe you explained it earlier and I just don't remember... 5*
This is the hottest story I've read in so long, love the way you write. Plus, you actually pay attention to butts, I feel like they're always ignored too much, and even if they aren't, they're the slim sort instead of the nice and big sort.
I just hope Sean gets over his bouts of assholery
A very loving and carnal embrace between mother and son. Soggy cunt is wise in her deliberations, and a mother's love breeds true. If only we were all so lucky as to complete our mother twice. Impregnating St. Eve in the Garden.