by keystrokers
Read it, loved it, read it again and blasted a load all over my chest. Fantastic story!
Keep writing. You have a great way with words. Seriously, amazing. So descriptive yet concise. If you ever need an editor email me.
The story brought me in... I was Nino. I loved it... I didn't want it to end!! Please give us more of Clark and Nino and their developing love story.
It's been a long time since I've read such a teasingly hot story. And running underneath the awesome sex was the secret love that Clark has for Nino. I'm guessing the girlfriend caught on to that during the threesome, and this was the real reason for their breakup. I hope Clark is rewarded by Nino returning his affections - and by having his huge cock up his ass. Looking forward to the next chapter.
fine build to climax. i hope to read more of the their adventures. thanks for a good read.
Really loved this tale. Building, building, building to a hot climax (pun intended). Hope you continue with more chapters.
Many guys have been in similar situations. It can be fun when buddies help each other out.
Clark is a lucky dude to have Nino. So willing and wanting. I hope to see more of their adventures in love and sexual awakening.
I read this story a few times before but hadn't commented. I have to say, it is as hot the third time as it was the first. Glad I found it again.