All Comments on 'My Descent into Slavery Ch. 05'

I suspected that all she would need to do to cum was to tell her 'Mistress' off, and then get herself off. I'm glad that she finally figured that out.

I'm glad that she made it thru all of Sahar's conditioning and got to visit her friends.

Please don't let Sahar get too mushy and sweet. I'm used to her being uber dangerous and I like her that way.

Anyway, thanks for another great chapter.

I'll be looking forward to more.

Yet another masterpiece that had e in tears at the end

Each time when I think the story couldn't get any better, you manage to do just that! What a wonderful experience, taking us along on this journey with Beth and her loved ones. I find myself wanting to read this again and again. Okay, I am a fan without hope (or need) of salvation, but the thought occurs that you can probably make some cash out of this, have it published and share it with many other readers.

You have satiated my Beth fix for a little bit.

Lovely. Thank you

Well after all that work and emotional turmoil on the island, I'm thrilled that Beth has exercised her body and exorcised her demons. I will be waiting with a great deal of anticipation to see what happens with Beth and Joshua when they meet again. How does it all settle out in the short term and the long term? I absolutely want another 50 chapters and a happy ending for everyone. Just thinking wildly with all of the characters and storylines already developed by Thors_Fist, I'm wondering if Sahar as Beth's bodyguard will eventually meet the famous actress/screenwriter Chloe Hamilton's bodyguard Lucia. I wonder how those two characters would interact with each other?

I’m going to say that this was absolutely perfect because I did read the majority of it and thought it was very well written. I skipped past the section where it looked like Sahar was going to talk about what she went through. Part of me feels bad for not reading all of this but I know my limits. I admire your strength and your ability to weave this kind of nightmare and pain into a story a damned good one at that. It can’t have been an easy topic to write about or an easy process.

Thanks for sharing, Tess (uk)

5 stars obvs.

I’ve read the entire saga now in order. It started as a wonderfully erotic story. It slowly turned into a nightmarish thriller. At different times it made me horny, made laugh, made me cry, made me rage and disgusted.

The fact that you’ve managed to put this into such an epic work speaks to your skill as both a writer and storyteller. The fact that I have grown to love the characters and long to hear more of their story is incredible; and the fact that I’ve been literally eager to continue reading more than any other tale (including Game of Thrones and anything else in both erotic literature and general world literature) should be an indication of the level you have reached.

Sahara had to work hard and work Beth even harder to break the conditioning. Gfeat instalment again.

I think I see Sahar as Beth's protector as more of the focus of this story. I'm lovin it. Five big stars.

I wish i had the time to write like this as it is so enjoyable to immerse oneself completely into a story because you feel part of it as it relates to your own life. Instead of the Bahamas my Adventurous Journey has taken me to another tropical place; the Philippines. As the scene and lifestyle is what you make of it as just like anywhere or anything there is Good and Bad as it is all in your perception and perspective and how you deal with it. As my mantra is to Adapt, Ajust and Accept with a lot of Patience as the mowt impoetant thing you can control is yourself, your emotional control and what you put in your mouth on many different levels. People are people and sometimes animals are much better but we should Value those closest to us and fight for and with them as just like in this story. Sahar exercised some of her demons too in sharing her story with Beth who she has grown to Love in showing her how to rejoin Life. I Admire Sahar in she turned her biggest struggle and failure into a success and gave that gift to someone she loved. I met a person who changed it all for me showing me i can have faith in some and Love and Trust them as we all carry scars as just like the Barb whip we have to confront them and not be ruled by them.