All Comments on 'My Father the Ob/Gyn : My daughter'
by lustful_aztec
- 22 Comments
That was too hot! Can hardly wait for the rest! Please hurry!
This story is made me ohhhh so horny!! I can't wait to see if their dreams become reality. One question though. Is the daughters name Virginia or Victoria?
I loved the medical situation. When the daughter goes to the real med. checkup, maybe there can be some female nurse in the med. office who gets to join the fun!
This is every young girl's dream come true (and a Daddy's, too). It was such a let-down to find it was only a dream but somehow I just know these two are going to REALLY discover the joy of fucking and sucking each other. I was so hot while reading it that I pulled on my nipples until they were like bullets. I can hardly wait to get my fingers on my clit and cum!
omg!! i got so fuckkin wet.. i wish my dad was here with me right now so he cud be rubbin on my clit instead of me.. this story is great.. u really need to finish ot tho! lol
Dam got me sooo horny wish I could fuck someone like that I would eat them out and squeeze her big boobs! U should hurry on a next and put a hot nurse and make her lesbian and join in
this was actually really erotic and interesting, i would have loved
to live this! Im very glad it was just a dream! Next story should
be amazing! Im fantasizing about the whole thing now..
that was so hot! my cock is nice and hard now as I sit here thinking of fucking and licking my lovely 19 year old blonde step daughter
All other things aside, this story has a huge glaring problem... It's first person from multiple person's perspective.
The only thing I know that causes this kind of mess is two people RP'ing in first person.
A little painful to read as it stands... if ONE SIDE could be converted to third or even second person, it would be bearable and perhaps even good (I couldn't get through it to say) but as it stands, it's pretty rough.
Wow this story's hot ! At first a little hard to follow tho. Please write more !!!
SOMEBODY FUCK ME PREGNANT! :-) AT +1 204-818-5259 IS TO REACH ME! :-D
I understand that editing your own stories is quite difficult but when she introduces herself as Virginia and then dad referred to her as Victoria Twice in the first 5 paragraphs I just can’t keep reading. When you only have two characters it should be pretty easy to remember their names. Silly but completely distracting.
Truly disgusting! He's going to fuck his own daughter, and doesn't even know her name.
I have never complained about spelling or little grammar errors until now. The daughter having two names drove me crazy. I still read it all and if it hadn't ended up as a dream I might not even have complained.
Pre-cum?! Girls don't have pre-cum! He's supposed to be a doctor for God's sake! Also, MAKE UP YOUR MIND! Is she Victoria or Virginia?!
Confusing as it kept jumping from different first person perspectives without any warning