All Comments on 'My Lactation Slave Ch. 03'

I'm loving this series, but there is something in here that is bothering me. The time frame that you've given for Maria and Jessie having been together seems long for the level of things they are doing together. This may just be me though. As far as technical details, there are a few minor ones, but otherwise you're doing great.

This has been an excellent story! since all subs need to be pushed, he should consider expanding her pony training, and truly breed her, to enhance his ownership, then show her with her foal, and increase her training accordingly.

Wow! 14 pages! So much for those who thought 8 pages were long!

I'm still reading and enjoying!

Hi, I have read all this story in one day, and it has been fantastic. I can't wait to find out what happens at the ceremony. My own udders are starting to swell with forced lactation, and I can't wait to be used as a cow by my Mistress. Don't keep us waiting too long for the next instalment.

I keep wondering if the story will include having her service Max and be tied by Max's knot in her pussy?

Enjoyed reading this, with the one caveat.....you should get an editor. That is very picky of me and not a reflection of the story telling at all.

14 pages, man your spoiling us, fantastic.

you've put my fantasies into words. I've lost track of how many times I've cum reading this! thank you

The story is amazing, with two incredibly minor things....

1. you need an editor. there are some spelling and grammar errors that kind of break things up.

2. shipping in your world moves at speeds those of us shopping on the internet can only dream off. This is generally indicative of the passage of time, things move incredibly quickly. That's not really a problem, but something to consider.

Great job. Really one of the best things, if not the best series, that I have read on this site.

makes my nipples ache as I twist and pull on them while jamming my dildo into me as I dream of a lactating lover. thank you for so much excitement.....

You so clearly understand the wishes and desires, fantasies and fetishes flat-chested women have.

Me?

I am a AA <blush> and like your previous commentator wrote, I've been terrified all my life of going out on a date and having s/him find out. "Meaningless little titties" is what I think of them.

Here you come and bring my deepest fantasies to life. To have such enormous tits I will never walk again, only crawl, and that you will make me someone's cow.

G-R-E-A-T story; perfectly written!

Stacey

This is a VERY good read!

A long chapter but it flew by. A bit concerned when Melinda request and Jack agreed to her being a cow but pleased that it came back to a more "normal" relationship. Excellent writing skills demonstrated throughout; only marred slightly by spelling and other mistakes. Well done. 5 stars.