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Click hereI squeezed her soft tits as I kept stabbing my dick in and out of her very wet cunt. She was rolling her trim hips around trying to feel every inch of my thick cock as I drove deep inside her sopping cunt and then retreated.
"I going to cum again for you, Adam, because I want to please you so much," she purred.
"We will get there together, Mom," I replied. "This will be a night that neither one of us will ever forget, Mom, the best love-making session that either one of us has ever experienced."
She moaned loudly, purring like a satisfied kitten as I relentlessly pounded her ass down into the dorm mattress. She was trying to lift and roll her hips to meet my deep cock thrusts while I squeezed her tits and kissed her lovely mouth. I slipped my tongue into her mouth, which she promptly started sucking on as I continued to plow my hard cock in and out of her juicy cunt.
"Lift up your beautiful tits for me, Mom, so that I can suck on them," I directed.
She lifted her heavy breasts off her ribcage, stretching them upwards towards my open mouth. I sucked on her erect nipples, pulling and tugging at them to bring moans of pleasure from her thin pink lips. Her small mouth hung open as she rolled her head side to side on the pillow while I sucked and squeezed her perfect tits.
"Oh Adam, you never liked to nurse on my breasts when you were an infant," she informed me.
"That's okay, Mom, I'm making up with my quality time on your beautiful breasts now that I'm older," I replied with a crooked grin. I reached down along her hips to slide my hands under her tight rounded ass. I lifted and pulled at her perfectly shaped bottom, trying to drive my cock even deeper inside her sloppy cunt.
"You can't get that big cock any deeper inside me, Adam, that's all there is," she cried out as I assailed her wet cunt like a man possessed. She pulled my face down to hers, plunging her tongue into my mouth as I fucked her wildly. "Oh Adam, fuck me baby. Fuck me like you've would have done when I was younger, prettier and my breasts were smaller and perkier. Oh God, Adam, I'm going to orgasm for you again," she moaned loudly.
"Fuck me, baby, fuck me Adam, I'm almost there," she added as I slammed my trim athletic hips between her open thighs. "Oh God, Adam, I'm going to orgasm," she cried again.
I continued to drive in and out of her wet cunt until I felt her hot juices flow down her wet gash to drench my cock. I never slowed my thrusting as she swooned underneath me, before lying there quietly basking in the afterglow of another orgasm.
"Oh God, Adam, I'm amazed that I can still keep up with you at my age, I've never had so many orgasms in my life," she softly whispered with a lingering smile. "I can't believe that you would want to fuck me the way that you have tonight. I couldn't have imagined that you would have lasted for such a long time without getting tired of my less than youthful charms."
"I'll never get tired of fucking you, Mom," I stated as I leaned down to kiss her lovely mouth once more. "Get up on your hands and knees, Mom, I want to fuck you doggie-style."
She stared up at me for a long moment before she responded. My cock fell from her wet cunt as she rolled onto her belly before she lifted her perfect heart shaped ass to assume the doggie style position.
"Get that tight perky ass of yours way up in the air, Mom," I added. I moved behind her and eased her slender thighs wider apart, before I reached up to grab a good handful of her short brown hair. I callously pushed her face down into her fluffy pillow while holding a handful of her hair as I slid my athletic hips underneath hers. I guided my cock to her sloppy gash, driving my entire length full depth in one hard thrust.
She moaned into her pillow as I started fucking her roughly from behind with a new passion. I was thrusting up inside her so hard that I nearly lifted her knees off the bed each and every time that I impaled her pussy with my evil and lustful carnal desire. Her tits were swaying forward and back as I fucked her wildly from behind. I slid my hands up along her back before reaching under to pull and tug at her tits. My six-pack abs were loudly slapping against her upturned ass as I pounded her from behind.
"Did Dad fuck you like this when he was trying to impregnate you to make us boys, Mom?" I blatantly asked, not really expecting a response from her.
"Yes he did, Adam," she surprised me by responding.
"Did Dad's cock feel this good inside you, Mom?" I leered over her shoulder.
"I think you know the answer to that question without any answer from me, Adam," she said.
I pummeled her sloppy cunt from behind with my stiff dick. She slightly surprised me by starting to push her motherly hips back to meet my deep cock thrusts. Her heavy breasts jiggled around on her chest from the force of my cock thrusting.
She softly grunted, "Unnn...Unnnn...Unnn," as I slammed my hips against her little upturned ass. As I continued to pound her for the next several minutes, her grunts turned to soft gasps as her breath became shorter and slightly ragged.
"Let yourself go again, Mom," I whispered into her ear as I continued to fuck her with long, deep cock strokes. "Cum for me, Mom, cum all over my hard cock that's sliding in your wet sloppy cunt!"
"Adam, oh God, Adam," she whimpered back to me pounding into her hips from behind. I was rapidly pushing her mature body towards another earth shattering orgasm. I ran my long fingers up and down her ribs before crushing her soft breasts in my muscular hands. "Fuck me, Adam, Fuck me. Make your lovely sexy Mom give in to her basest instincts after all these years. Oh God, Adam, I'm going to orgasm again on your big cock plowing in and out of my sloppy pussy," she softly said.
Were you a virgin when you met Dad and did he pop your cherry?"
"I was a good girl when I was younger, Adam" she answered. "I was a virgin when we were married and your father was my first. Now I'm many years older, have 2 grown boys, I'm well on my way to a divorce, and my oldest son is fucking me like a cheap whore in his college dorm bed. I guess I'm not such a good girl anymore."
I continued to slam my hips into her uplifted cunt while I squeezed her soft hanging tits. I could feel the pressure building inside my balls as I plunged my dick in and out of her sloppy cunt. "I'm getting ready to cum inside you again, Mom," I informed her. "I'm going to pump another huge load of sperm deep inside your cunt to drip down into your uterus in search of an old egg to impregnate, just like Dad did with you so many times before."
"Oh Adam, oh God Adam, yes baby boy," she moaned loudly as I held her trim hips and thrust as deep as possible inside her time after time. I was fucking her as hard and deeply on each thrust as I possibly could. "Fuck me, Adam, fuck me and fill me with another gallon of your hot sperm," she moaned.
I grabbed her short brown hair with one hand while squeezing a soft tit with the other. I pulled her back towards me as I pounded her from behind, until I was leaned back on my thighs with her sitting on my lap. I was driving my prick up into her relentlessly as I turned her face so I could kiss her. Our mouths melted together, our tongues playing tag while she softly moaned.
I felt my cock twitch and tighten, releasing a massive load of my creamy goo deep into her softest flesh. I backed up and thrust again, my cock spurting more precious sperm deep into her saturated cunt.
"Yes, Adam, give Mommy all of your hot sperm," she moaned as I repeatedly thrust a number of times while she swooned, perched on top of my lap. "Fill me with your sperm so much deeper than your father ever did." I kept pumping my hips into her pussy until my cock softened and slipped from her soaked cunt.
She twisted around to lie back on her bed and pulled me down on top of her, grinding her wet cunt up against my softening dick until she gasped. "I needed to orgasm one more time on your cock, Adam," she moaned. "The feeling of your sperm being pumped so deep inside me makes me want to orgasm in such a nasty animalistic way, Adam." She plunged her pointy tongue into my mouth, which I promptly sucked on as she continued to grind her wet crotch against me. "You're turning your old Mom into such a cock hungry slut, Adam. A slut who has never experienced so many intense orgasms like this before," she moaned as she pulled her mouth from mine.
"How many orgasms for my beautiful Mom so far?" I questioned just to see if my count was accurate.
"I've had 13 incredible orgasms with you, Adam," she responded. "How many did you think I had?"
"I only had you at 7 or maybe 8 orgasms, Mom, you must have snuck a couple past me," I said.
"I had a couple smaller mini orgasms besides the very obvious ones," she stated with a huge smile.
"I'm glad you had more than I counted, Mom, I want to please you beyond measure," I stated.
"Are you done with me for now, Adam? May I go get cleaned up?" she asked.
"Yes, Mom, for a little while," I replied with a grin. "Maybe we will just need a quickie in the morning before we drive back home."
She laughed as she rose from the bed and walked into my dorm bathroom. Moments later, she started the shower and I decided to join her. "Ready for more of Mommy, Adam?" she asked as I drew back the curtain to join her in the shower.
"Always, Mom," I replied as I pulled her body tightly against me. I slowly and gently washed her hair and soaped up her lovely petite body before she rinsed off and stepped out. She sprawled out on the bed across a folded towel to cover our wet spot, and was instantly asleep. I eased her tiny limp body to the middle of the bed and crawled in behind her, spooning against her naked butt as I held her tits.
She woke me in the morning saying, "Wake up sleepy head, it is time to get moving." I opened my eyes to see it was bright and sunny outside with the window shades pulled partially back. She was fully dressed in the clothes that she had arrived in, looking absolutely radiant from our night of incredible sex.
"What time is it?" I inquired.
"It's a few minutes after 10, time to get on the road and headed for home," she stated. "We need to stop and get something to eat, I'm starving."
"I've got something for you to eat, Mom," I said with a huge grin as she sat down on my bed.
"Is that all you are going to think about now, Adam?" she asked with a big smile. "I need real food to eat, not just your big sausage with its creamy gravy," she laughed. "Get dressed while I strip off your sheets and get your towels together, we will wash them when we get home."
I rolled onto my back and pushed the upper sheet away, revealing my semi stiffened cock. She sat down on the edge of the bed, looking at my cock like she was still fascinated by it before glancing up at my face with a huge smile. "How about a quick hand job, Mom?" I asked.
"I don't know if there is anything quick about you, Adam," she stated with a big grin. She sat in front of me dressed in her gray dress slacks and pink scoop neck top and gently tugged at my soft dick. She leaned over and kissed my mushroom tip with a tiny peck. I was looking down the front of her pink blouse to see her breasts tightly strapped down in her bra. My prick instantly started to stiffen in her tiny hand as I enjoyed her soft dick tugging while looking at her perfectly shaped tits.
She giggled like a little girl at my cock's quick reaction to her small hand. She leaned over and licked around the tip of my cock, before she took a couple of inches of my now hardened cock into her tiny mouth to smear some of her saliva along her length. "Suck on my cock, Mom," I urged as her mouth took in several inches of my cock to the point of my circumcision scars.
"Not right now, Adam," she replied as she cradled my tight balls in one hand while gently stroking my length with the other. "Besides, I told you my mouth is too small and your penis is way too big," she purred. As I stiffened, grew and hardened, she moved to half sit and half kneel between my wide spread legs. She went from using one tiny hand on my rigid cock to using both hands, one stacked above the other.
I lay back and enjoyed the incredible sensation of her stroking my dick in the middle of my dorm bed. "Take your pink top off so that I can look at your lovely tits, Mom," I requested.
"No, Adam, I'm already dressed," she replied. "You should have awakened a bit earlier if you wanted to see my naked breasts." She kept looking down to watch my dick lovingly as she stroked it to an ever- increasing rigidity. She smiled and licked around her thin pink lips as she continued to give me a great amount of pleasure. With every upward stroke of her hands, she rubbed her thumb and index finger across the sensitive tip of my cock, making me lift my hips to thrust into her hands.
I gazed down her pink blouse to see the perfect valley of her cleavage from her bra strapping her tits up tightly. She ran her right thumb up and down the crease of my cock several times before she spit onto my tulip shaped tip and smeared it around with her other thumb. She kept looking down at my cock lovingly as she stroked me, as if she was amazed to see how big and hard that I was growing right in front of her eyes from her tender touch. She moved up entirely onto her knees as she stroked my now fully enraged cock with both hands.
I continued to gawk down the front of her blouse at the valley of her tits and she looked up at my face and smiled when she caught me. I could see that her nipples were already trying to push their way through her bra. After several minutes, I saw a big pearly drop of her pre-cum ooze out of my huge dick and she blatantly smeared it around my mushroom tip with both thumbs before sliding the remnants down my stiffened length. My breathing became shorted and heavier as she quickly pushed me towards my impending release. "I'm going to cum soon, Mom," I warned her while she simply smiled.
She continued to stroke my unbendable cock with both hands as she could feel me begin to twitch. She rubbed both hands against the mushroom tip of my cock as she stroked my dick.
"I'm going to cum, Mom," I moaned as her touch sent me over the edge. My first half-hearted spurt landed in the middle of my belly as she stroked me harder. My second blast was a real geyser, reaching all the way up to land on my throat and chin. She tightened her grip on my manhood, causing the third eruption to be thinner and harder, shooting all the way up onto my pillow beside my head. The fourth spurt was a gusher also, landing a huge load with a loud splat in the middle of my chest while she continued stroking. My fifth heavy spurt landed at the bottom of my ribs as my volume and intensity began to wane. She continued to stroke my cock as it had three more mini eruptions before it was finally just oozing small gobs onto her hands, which she smeared around my mushroom like head as a thick gooey lotion.
"Wow, Adam, I never knew that a guy could cum that much, your father certainly never came like that," she stated with a huge grin. "Now I know why I felt so full when you came inside my vagina, and how we made such a mess of the sheets when our combined juices leaked out of me."
She smiled a huge smile before she leaned over to take my softening cock in her mouth. She licked around my tip to devour my gooey residue before she licked the back of her hands. She slowly moved up my young muscular body licking off my thick gobs of cum into her sexy mouth and swallowing it until the only traces of my massive ejaculation were smeared on the sheets and pillowcase of my dorm bed.
- COMMENTS
Definitely need an editor. One paragraph stated he lied and told her he was a virgin till her and only had BJ from Erin and Chris. Then the next oarsgraph mom said those same two dluts were walking funny the next day like she probably would. I can understand a page later, but not even three sentences following? Snd a woman getting fucked by a 10 inch duck cums a lot, not ORGASM. Details of your fucking, for hours it seems with the description of same, is repetitive verbatim. Get an editor
Olin 21.aastane ja viibisin liiklusavarii tõttu vanglas 1,5.aastat.Ema külastas mind aasta pärast kolm päeva.Siis ma nikkusin oma ema terve öö,algul oli vastu aga lõpuks tuli mulle alla.See oli meie imeline öö.
Ask Google what the average length of penises is and you'll get the answer of 5.1 inches while hard, with a diameter of about 1 inch. All you guys with dicks 5 1/2 " long should be real proud. You're bigger than most people. 9 and 10 inch dicks ruins the stories and turns off most people. I think most of us are tired of reading about them. I know I am.
I think the following quote makes the case.
"while I rested both my large right hands on her hips."??
The idea of this story is very interesting but your use of words are way of with what you are typing, please get an EDITOR !!!!! and PROOF READER !!!! to correct your many many errors. The score I gave you was only for the idea of plot of the story but if there was a score to give for spelling or using the right words for whatever you are trying to say then you would be getting a big minus tally.
The setup was good. Then the sex was just the same expressions and dialog over and over. This story should have been much shorter. The dialog was weird. Who talks this way? And how do you LEER words? Leering is done with the eyes. Edit this story!
Give us a break. I'm sure that no one says that. If a fuck was as good as you like us to read, i for one would be screaming "OH MY GOD! I'M GONNA CUM ALL OVER YOUR SWEET COCK!" instead of "I'm going to orgasm on your penis."
You really need to make use of an Editor here or elsewhere. For example, you can not "leer" words into someones ear. The word LEER means... : to look at someone in an evil or unpleasantly sexual way. to leer is to look at someone, not speak into their ear!!! Then there was misused plurals, past and current tense of words, and the wrong words all together. Honestly, it reads as if a 3rd grader wrote it, and one that was in the bottom 10 percent of his classmates. Having said that, please know I mean no ill will, I think your story could be an amazing story, if you take others advice on your writing, as well as take advantage of an Editor. I don't understand why so many writers here don't submit them to an Editor, is it your Ego? Trust me when I say you will be judged far less for the use of an Editor, vs submitting work like this.
Keep writing, and listen to others advice, making sure to separate the haters from the "helpers". I look forward to your stories, as they improve. Rigatony <:-)
I'm making these comments because you are a beginner and could use some help. If you don't want help just say fuck you dreamer and delete this.
Are you trying to write erotic fiction, or erotic fantasy? There is a difference, and both have a place in life.
If you are trying to write fantasy, you can do just about anything you want; you can have your man fuck anything from a skunk to a horse while leaping tall buildings and fighting men from Mars. If you choose this path, you still have the burden of getting your reader to suspend belief long enough to get into and through your story. In other words, you will have to be one hell of a writer.
If, however, you want to write erotic fiction, the nearer you can portray your characters as real people, the better your story will be. Try making your women look a little like someone you know. Do you really know a woman with zucchini shaped breast? Maybe there is a zucchini other than the long cucumber like squash that I don't know about, if so, stick with your guns. The writers resources on this site have many articles about writing which would be a great help to you. If you go there, be sure to check out the ones on anatomy, and the functions of the human body. If you find any evidence that a human male can cum in the amounts you imply, more power to you. Anyway, you get the idea--make things believable. I once saw a porno film where the actor had what looked to be about a 24 inch cock and a pussy. I saw it, but I don't believe it. We want our readers to believe what we write really happened, when and where we said it did.
Finally, in erotica, less is usually more. You would have had a much better story had you limited it to two pages, (about 5000 words). Too many readers will start scanning rather than reading the long stories, unless they are really good. You and I are not that good yet. KEEP IT TIGHT--PROOFREAD ALOUD--PRINT IT THEN PROOF IT FROM THE PRINTED PAGE. It will make a difference. Check out my work on Taboo and Loving Wives. Compare the earlier ones to the latter stories to see if following this advice, (which was given to me) helped. GOOD LUCK --KEEP WRITING You do have talent. thecarolinadreamer
Your build up to the sex was pretty good and the sex was really good. For a start you have written a very sexy story that really should not end here. You have set the stage for the mom to be submissive to her son, so carry this on with the son slowly, but positively dominating his mom (not in a mean way) to perform sex acts that she would never have thought of before having sex with her son. This could really expand into many chapters or end here. Although, like others have indicated, this story deserves more chapters. You need to quickly deal with the father and the brother to make this a real love story between mom and son. Don't bring the brother into the incest as that, in my opinion, ruins the story line. Keep the affair going and the sex steamy hot. Even some exhibition with the son forcing mom to expose herself or have sex in the car, etc.
I loved the story and buildup, but the sex was overdone and repetitive. You clearly have skill, just needs a bit of refinement.
I'm ok with the bbig dick and repetition. We are talking porn here. What was up with the gratuitous black guy reference? Still give it 4 stars for the eroticism and general voice.
Got me off like gangbusters only 1/2 into the story! Got to rest; but, can't wait to finish it!
and love it when a dick size war breaks out among readers. I mean come on man, if you got 5 incher doesn't mean every one else around you is a loser in that department. I know one of my friend got more than 10 inch in his sack but it doesn't mean every woman he comes in contact with wanna have it up their cunts. But hey if you don't like reading big dick stories, just leave it. No need to make a big issue out of it. Just my thoughts. Sorry folks continue your banter.
I've seen enough porn to know that it's possible to have a double-digit cock. For some reason there is a small but vocal contingency of readers here that lose their fucking minds if the protagonist's cock is larger than 6 inches.
Those nimrods want average looking people boning. Who the hell wants to read about a middle aged mom with a paunch and floppy fried egg tits fucking her equally fugly and average-dicked son? Nobody in their right mind would want to visualize that shit.
What you need to realize is that you are writing a story for yourself. A story about what you think is hot and sexy. If other people like it...awesome. If they're total douches that tear it apart...then fuck'em. None of those posers ever write stories anyway.
The inconsistency put me off. (Go meet a woman, or at least check out some actual bra sizes.)
I'll admit that I'm another reader who had the thought to stop reading this tale the moment I reached the "10-inch cock" reference. I thought, "Oh, shit! Another 10-inch cock story! Either some folks just never learn, or else they read the stories but not the feedback - or they'd see how much flack the "10-inch stories" tend to get, from the readers. But, I pressed on, hoping the story would improve.
It didn't, sadly. I continued to read on, only to discover that this "Adam" is truly a freak of nature. Not only does he have a 10-inch cock, he also has TWO large right hands. (It's on "page 1" - check it out: "...I rested both my large right hands on her hips." )
And, boring? 14 or 15 times, we were 'treated' (more like "subjected"!) to hearing Mom say, "I'm gonna orgasm all over your [adjective] [adjective] penis!" Finally, as the story nears its ending, she does figure out how to tell her son, "I'm fucking coming!", and - just once - she manages to refer to her son's appendage as a cock.
Overall, I found the story to be rather dull, boring, and quite formulaic - with nothing in the way of content to really make it original or distinguish it from all of the other pieces of drivel about teens with 10-inch cocks that have been submitted to (or, is it, "inflicted upon"?) Literotica and its readers. I gave it a solid "1" (negative numbers not being available for use in rating it) and certainly won't be reading any further chapters in this story. I'm even thinking of suing the author to get back the time it took me to read THIS chapter!
Please, i'm not here for reality, but I stopped reading when you described the dude as scrawny and weak to six-one lean and muscles with the biggest pecker in town. That makes no sense. I would be a bad ass motherfucker at 6'1 165.
Reminds me of a time when my mother accompanied me on an overnight trip to Austin, TX. Fond memories - great story
I enjoyed the story and eagerly await part two where young Adam continues to hump away into his mothers soft warm and wet pussy and firing volley after volley of his seed into his mother. I loved the animalistic tone where he is taking his mother from behind while whispering in her ear the sweet incestuous fact the he is filling her with his sperm and hopes it finds one of her old eggs to fertilize. Perhaps in part two the son can get two wishes at once and successfully knock up his mommy while his dad watches and jerks off in the corner dribbling his seed into the carpet. This way everyone is happy mom, son, and dad.
A well done lewd story that had me beating my meat to a happy ending.
Hope to read a few more chapters. Very good first time effort. You did not forget anyone's name as most story tellers do. Can hardly wait for the net offering....
LOVED IT it was one of the hottest stories I've ever read and I've read plenty keep writing please,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
- Another kid with a "complex of a small dick"??
Yaaa.. "10 inches" :)) And could it be otherwise? :)
- And why not "15 inches"? - Or not "18" ?? :)
( O! I see that others noticed it too? - I think it passing fashion for
these infantile and naive "confabulation" - characteristic of adolescence.)
Sorri that I was mistaken. It wasnt 3 fools complaining about a 10 inch dick. It was 7 fools complaining about a 10 inch dick. My dick is 8 and a a half inches long, and I think that is normal. Do you think there will be any more fools complain about a 10 inch dick, after my comment. I want to see a picture of your dick to prove to me to see if it really is 10 inches. His dick doesnt have to be 10 inches. He said the story was fiction, his dick doesnt have to be 10 inches. If he said his dick was 4 inches, the same people would be glad that his mother wouldnt fuck him anymore, that she would have to go out and find her a white. Can you believe 7 people and counting complains over nothing wrong. His motherr was happy. I didnt hear commenters complaining about what they need to be complaining about, of his mother 20 times comparing his dick to his dadddys dick. I would tell her to get her damn husband back. On a loving wives section. How can there be a section called loving wives, thats about wives fucking around. Then many commenters complain about thaat she is committing adultery. Go figure! Thats a minor quibble to a great story.
I am the fourth person to simitaneously to quit reading after the 10 inch dick. I am just bullshitting. What the hell is wrong with this guy writing about a 10 inch dick? Maybe his dick really is 10 inches. Big dam deal! Three commenters claimed to quit reading simultaneously after the 10 inch dick. Did all 3 commenters have a chrystal ball to read each others minds to stop reading similtaneously.. Bullshit. Most of these commenters are jealous their dicks are so tiny. These gay, I mean unhappy, commenters sure like to talk about dicks a lot. Bullshit on the nitpickers. Tou nitlickers just need to go out and get your dicks worked on, or maybe your heads worked on.You done good.
Captured emotions and actions in a realistic way. Quite a few guys have similar feelings and would love opportunity. Good Job
left the story when the 10 inch cock appeared.
The 30 year old Mr. N, wrote, "This is my first submission, so be kind with your criticism." Okay, the story was too long, 2 and a half or 3 pages would've sufficed. There's too much repetition and extraneous material. But, come on, the guy's heart is in the right place. I'm sure the author was hard when he wrote this hot story and that he shot a big healthy load of his own at the end. N's hero, Adam, is a down and dirty young motherfucker of the kind we all love and cheer on. This boy knows exactly where his hard young cock belongs--right up the same warm wet hairy hole he came out of, up to his balls. He's not the sort of namby-pamby kid who puts his mother on a pedestal. Adam keeps calling that wonderful hole between his mother's legs not just her "pussy," but her "cunt." That's a big step forward for a son, when he thinks to himself, "my mother's cunt, my own mother's cunt." Adam makes his mom into an animal, her mind's a blank except for what she's feeling in her mommy-hole--her own boy's powerful prick ravaging and plundering her poor defenseless vagina and giving her one blissful cum after another. She's totally over the moon when Adam gives a loud grunt and blows his young balls, splattering his semen all over the insides of his mother's cunt and painting her pink cunt-walls a nice sticky white. Now Adam knows that his mom is definitely the best piece of ass he'll ever enjoy, just as she knows that her boy is the by far best fucker she'll ever spread her legs for. I for one look forward to a sequel by this gifted author.
Except for the 10 in cock. Also seemed the son was somewhat of an arrogant asshole instead of a compassionate lover.
Good dialogue but frankly too much over the top sex. Trim it down a bit, tighten it up but a great first posting.
Like others have already pointed out, it was okay in the beginning but it got somewhat repetitive towards the end. You didn't need to point out that the father's boss was black every damn time. We get it, he was black. You don't need to keep pointing that out every sentence.
Definitely a great start, but could use some restraint with the adjectives.
It started out good, but it was so repettive that it got boring after a while.
I liked the first description of the mother's body but there was too much repetitive description and her tits seemed to get bigger. The long dick nonsense was boring but I did read all the way through and had to laugh at the end when you said something about her taking the dick a few inches to the circumcision scars. If you have scars a few inches down your dick, the circumcision was done wrong.
Stopped reading at 10" cock - get fucking real. No stars, not for this endless garbage.